No offense, too short.

I think it's a good start, but to what? It's too short to have any grasp of. If this is mainly a look back at the end of Hellsing, it's promising. If it is merely a chance to generate future based Mary Sue types... not so good. Hard to know, but no problem with this little drabble. The note about pain lessening hits me hard (sometimes yes, sometimes no depending on the loss). It give weight to the piece.