LOL these moments are great! I could actually see them happening, too. Your a great writer, so you should def keep up the good work. I love LuNa pairings and write them myself. If you have the time, do you think you could read my latest one, Of Late Nights and Oranges? Its a pre-Mermen Island Arc. (If you've read the manga, the strawhats will be heading to mermen island soon) once again great job!

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These were really cute and good. ^^

Pretty cool story. I like the way you list the seasons.

It's really a shame there's so litte Nami/luffy writers as good as you. You make them sound SO in character, both of them acting like they SHOULD, like how they ARE, and that's so hard to find in LuNa romance. Thank you for this little piece of story.

Aw...I like this pairing...it needs more love...

This is very good! Grammatically, things are good (though I noted a few instances where you changed tenses, POVs, rather suddenly). Content wise, it's very amusing, and the ending is very nice. Thank you, for contributing to the extremely rare amount of well written L/N fictions.

I liked it, cute fluffyness!

~*White Fuzzy Ears*~

Ah, so kawaii! I love your interaction between Luffy and Nami especially- and the autumn island has to be my favourite of the four, not because of the very end (although that is a bonus,) but the whole scarf thing is such a Luffy thing.

Ah well, I'm rambleing here. Nice job, and keep up the good work.

Sweet and perfect.