I honestly don't know what to say.
I can't think of any reason you only have two reviews so far.
This is so accurate in its portrayal of Malik that it's eerie.
His self-loathing is something that really hit home here. I felt my breath catching as I read those parts.
I do like the ending, though I'm not sure if it's a oneshot or otherwise.
BTW, you managed not to make it really offensive. Or offensive at all, really.

This is quite literally like finding
a diamond in the
middle of a rock mine.

The story is so positively canon
that is's almost eerie.
Your Malik is so beautifully written in the sense that
it's so in character!
If Yuugiou had continued in following Malik's life,
I really could
see this happening.
-mind you, I like the image of him male much more-
;P

Aside from the decent grammar and correct spelling,
I am completely in awe with this!
Thank you for writing this fic!
It made my day!
-Love
Ami

Good fic!
Poor Malik I´m curious about what he will said.
Keep going^^