He, he, I'm liking this.

Oh, this was delightful! I loved Zuko's pervy thoughts about her.

I think I've reread this three times already. And I still enjoying reading it. I can't wait for the updates to come out! It's been months but we, you're fans are still patiently waiting for the next few installments. Hopefully it'll be soon...^_^

misunderstanding of the year man

Awesome! I beg you not to stop cuz that was a really fun read!

ah this is so exciting!! zutara tension is awesome!!

Oh wow!! This is really good, I really like it. You made alternating POV *AND* present-tense WORK! XD. It's believable (picturable, at the very least) and it's got dashes of humor in it, which I love. It's great how they're both awkward and unsure about their hidden romantic feelings, and you include the companionship they share, like how Zuko needs Katara. I really hope you update soon! It's an awesome start!!

*glomps* I love it! Just what I was looking for in a story. Your writing style is refreshing, and the plot line is excellent! I can't wait for the next chapter.

You have to update this! I was laughing my head off!
There's just one thing I don't get, How did Zuko join the gag?

the story is good so far!
hope u do another ch.!
:)

hahahaha! poor poor Zuko!! if only he knew how she felt for him!! great chapter! I really liked it!

Lol, yes Zuko is very slow at times. *sigh*

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Normally I can't stand Katara's POV in stories- especially first person POV. But for some reason this one is so obviously what she would think that I didn't even notice that it was first person Katara POV until I read someone else's review commenting on it. So I figured I might as well comment on it too, as in- Well, of course this will happen in the show. It's inevitable. Also, EK! It's bloody brilliant! I hope you keep writing more, though I'm the first (well, maybe second) to acknowledge that writers have other constraints on their time besides their various muses.

I agree that Zuko has plenty of potential to be a hero, but even as far as I've gotten into the series he has a lot of growing up to do first.

For some reason, most of the fics I feel moved to review are ones that I can't fault grammatically, which is my main "constructive criticism" thing. Isn't that odd?

Oh, wow, on rereading I also noticed that this fic is present tense. That's normally something I can't stand, but you've really made it work. I guess it's the random tense-jumping that bothers me, not the actual correctly used present tense.

Excellent, very well written. Can't wait for more.

that was so awsome! poor Katara!! "no molesting Prince Figurehead." I'd be depressed too!! lo, anyways, keep up the good work and I can't wait till you update with the new chapter!! (if your going to write another, becuase you should if you arn't.)