 xXxTsukuyomixXx 2007-07-03 . chapter 4K-Kakashi-kun is a cougar?? ohh my you have no idea how much that just made me want to jump him xD
Awesome ficcy!! Keep it up!
Ciao~ |
 Kiyoshi Shichiro 2007-07-03 . chapter 4A cougar, huh? I'll definetly have to check that out. I wonder what Sakura is up to now, and why it concerns Kakashi. Can't wait to see what you give to us next. Oh, um... I was just curious about the whole NaruSaku thing. I was hoping you could add tidbits here and there until you actually get them together. Or not, whatever you decide to do is fine, I'll be patient. (What can I say, I'm a sucker for NaruSaku) Later. |
 Razvanor 2007-07-03 . chapter 4Well, this did move the story forward, I suppose, though I don't readily see anything worth critiquing. But it was good to have an update.
-Raz |
 ArticEmbers 2007-07-03 . chapter 4wow this is great please continue^_^ |
 SpeedDemon315 2007-07-03 . chapter 4 This is quite unlike anything I have ever read yet it's really good. The animal comparision to each character is interesting (Tsunade as a hippo was extremely amusing). It seems there is never a dull moment when you're a god's vessel. |
 xantidote 2007-07-03 . chapter 4This is a very intruging storyline! I'm surprised to see such a potential fic has so little reviews! Don't falter, youre doing great. Did you purposely name the goddess 'konohana' (sp?) like the village? I thought what she meant by Sakura gaining what she lost by the tenfold was Sasuke and his love. *shrugs* eyesight works well too. Looking foward to your updates! |
 2007-06-15 . chapter 1 This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever. |
 fruitsbasketangel 2007-06-14 . chapter 3cool story |
 Razvanor 2007-06-14 . chapter 3Hippo? Eh, all right.
So, she's seeing, what? The inner manifestations of their souls, or something?
XD
Anyway, this chapter seemed a bit odd compared to the others. But I suppose it's one of those necessary chapters where it needs to be in place. Eh, well, we'll see, right?
I like the quick thinking on Sakura's part though. Owl indeed.
-Raz |
 Misaotheokashira 2007-06-13 . chapter 3I like the idea for this story. You're right, Sakura spent a lot of time building up her power to 'compete' with the boys, and that was taken away...but where is this story going, I wonder? ^_^ I loved the hippo...I actually didn't thing of Egyptology at first, I thought of Fantasia! I'm looking forward to the long haul. There's a LOT of ways this story could go~ I look forward to a solid storyline and good character development! Couple of typos, but that's throughout the three chapters (let me know if you need a beta). |
 sillymail 2007-06-13 . chapter 3Good job. |
 Kiyoshi Shichiro 2007-06-12 . chapter 3Are the animal forms all she can see? It was a bit confusing with the way you described Tsunade's appearance. Speaking of which, I couldn't help but laugh at the "Tsunade is a hippo" thing. I wonder what form Jiraiya would take. What about Sasuke? OH! He's a fan (not an animal, I know, but funny nonetheless). Hey, how is she going to get around all the non-living objects. Is it going to be one of those enhanced sensibility scenarios? Maybe, the more she gets used to it the more she be able to pick out areas where non-living objects lay. Unless living things show through them? I don't know! So send another chapter our way soon, please. |
 Razvanor 2007-06-09 . chapter 2Ah, did you quit this story? I like it so far. It's fascinating. Would it help if I gave you cookie? A cyber cookie, of course. But something nonetheless.
The pacing of the story seems a bit odd. The passage of the week should have been better spaced out. Not necessarily even making it longer, you should have put a page break, or something.
Other than that, a good story. An intriguing one.
-Raz |
 Sienna Alexanderson 2007-03-28 . chapter 2This story is so nicely written!! I would love to read more if you were to write more!! |
 Kiyoshi Shichiro 2007-02-28 . chapter 2Wow, this story is shaping up to be one of few fics that are worth reading. There's too much crap out there. You stuck to Sakura's character well, especially when you had her refuse the goddess the first time. Inner Sakura was portrayed well, also. I have read many fics where Inner Sakura and Sakura herself often had conflicting interests. You show Inner Sakura as exactly what she is: Sakura's restrained self.
Is Sakura going to have any other abilities? That seeing living things through their needs and joys is unique and I like it, but she's going to need something more. Nothing too extravagant. Just maybe something to tip the scales slightly. Or is there something to this goddess' sight you have yet to reveal?
One thing bothered me. Naruto was surprised to see Inner Sakura, but why wasn't he surprised to find Sakura there, as well? It's nothing big, I know, but it just seems a little off. Anyway, spelling errors aside, you're doing a great job. I hope to see more of this fic, for it has me greatly intrigued. |