kewl

Yes, you are right, the english is a little sloppy. But since you are just learning, I won't hold it against you.

The story was good, but I have a problem with just one thing: Alcohol does not affect Clark. He would not get drunk from tequila. Other than that, it was great.

this is soo cute. it's really nice and i spent a long time infront of the computer just reading it. i love it that even though you don't know english as a first language you wrote your story and oh...well it's really good and cute. oh and i hate lana...and love lois.lol...and chloe too.i like her.your idea was awsome. "i don't remember". you read my story too. it's not a smallville story but read it anyway. *cheeky smile* ;-D

~~silverfaerie~~

goodish story but definatly need a betta person other than that fine