This was superb.

Such a sad ending! I loved the way this was written though.

An absolute treat to read. I adore the fics that can convey love between two characters without resorting to wild, sweaty intercourse. Ha. A gem of a story. Loved every line of it. Teared up towards the end *sniff*. Love that you made the concept of "love" almost foreign to Itachi. Love this!

Awesome story, I almost cried :(

I love it because Itachi is not so OOC (he is OOC just because he loves someone :D). U describe him like he really is and that is great! Good job!

XOXO Mirunique

OMG. That is sweet. Question how long were they together like that.

...you have no idea how much that made me cry...

It was like a sad and soundless melody yet it brings a warm feeling on a dark day...Too cheesy, yes?

Thank you for sharing such a great story!

bakasaru

Wouldn't it be nice if that's how it actually happened?

ah. what a wonderful story.

so beautiful so so so very beautiful

Such a sad and poignant story. It went very well with the songs and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the amazing work!

Totally different worlds but they still fell in love. Good job.

That was a beautifully written story. You have a unique writing style, which is a breathe of fresh air. I loved it and hopefully you'll be writing more. Thanks for the great read!

I took your recommendation about listening to the songs while I read. I kinda didn't pay too much attention to the combination, until the chorus of 'Chasing Cars' started at just the right time.

"And when he let go, she slowly descended, lying on her back to face the heavens, and he followed her example."

'If I lay here, if I just lay here, would you lie with me...'

It was perfect.

Beautiful.