I absolutely love the ending!

Loved the ending, loved it, loved it, loved it.
i was really impressed by the parts of the story where desire is talking to itself. The lines are so well written (forgive me but i cannot find a better word)
you have a certain way with words. Its captivating

Aw, that's a sweet ending (perhaps taken with a mouthful of grit and sand but sweet none the less) if I ever saw one :D Looking forward to seeing more of Blue and Toya, and in fact, all/any of your characters. They seem so real that I can barely restrain myself from biting a chunk of out them ;) (though I doubt Blue would appreciate that, hoho!)

Do keep writing and take care!

- dash

Near-end of another little story so quickly. It has left me wondering... wouldn't it be intriguing if it had been Blue who was faced with Desire instead of Toya? Anyhow, off to the Epilogue :D

Poor Toya... however, it does seem inanely stupid that she should be caught in the illusion again and again, measuring it out to be reality. But of course, we all enjoy our illusions don't we? ;) Keep up the wonderful flow of words, my lovely singing storyteller.

- dash

Same ol' Blue, heart heart.

I love the tingles I'm getting imagining what' touching Micheal's arm, oh, spooky! :D

AAW! Now that I've read enough of you stories with fluffy 'Blue bits' I'm not too sure that I want to kill him now... some times I don't mind him. Well, I suppose that you'll just have to keep on writing more fics!!
Shang Leopard.

::sigh:: its sweet, the sandcastles, i like it alot, i love their back and forth conversatons trying to get the better of eachother, i love how blue takes losing thier mini battles so well with just by saying touche...

keep it up, i would love to see more

i love all the blue/chatoya stories- but what order r they? and please can you do another really long one( could it possibly b that some1 is trying to take over one of the Furies?) if u did that would be so great!

-sigh- I had this weird thought occurance if Chatoya ran off to another powerful sociopath and Blue got jealous -.- sounds so cliche doesn't it?

Is Chatoya a masochist by the way? -.- She seems like it, even though, yes Blue is all that horrible and evil and her soulmate but still. Hasn't she ever thought of commiting suicide so Blue might go insane and die, hopefully, sparing the world from more deaths?

I do love your work by the way, I just had the urge to muse out loud -.-

Sorry!

How scary would that be, to have your secret desires laid out before you? It gives me the chills.

Anyway great work, it's so awesome that Toya had to confront her desires. I really loved and enjoyed this piece, honestly.

i love all your stories, they are so great! i love the blue-chatoya stories the most so please continue with this story!

Hi. I believe I've only reviewed you one other time. And I read this, and I thought, why not? I'm half in love with Toya and Blue anyway. I really do love your stuff. Unfortunately I do not know why. Is the the usual style of L J Smith's writing? I've never read anything by Smith; I just came across your works in some author's favorites about a year ago and read Chimera. Fell in love then and there. I can say I do wish to see more of Toya and Blue in future fics; it's rare to see such an interesting relationship. Highly original to me.

Also, if you would grace me with a reply, I would like to know the titles of the books regarding Nightworld. I'll dearly love to go pick one up from my nearest library or second-hand bookstore. Thank you. I do look forward to more of your works.

Magnificent!! Absoloutely loved it, been a while since i read anything of yours, i think the last was Chimera, but this was way worth taking time out of studying for!! Oh and i am eagerly awaiting Lisa O'Chai's story of her soulmate. Thank you for writing and sharing... magnificent!! Calita