This story is so great! I just love the casualness that you portrayed throughout the entire thing. When they were in the kitchen, it was really funny, and extremely believable. That's something most authors aren't strong at, and you are very good at it. Duo's little speech on "storybook romances" was so witty and fantastic, and you could tell that he was having so much fun imagining Trowa and Quatre's relationship to be like a movie.

In particular, I really liked Heero and Wufei's interactions. They were hilarious together, and you could tell that they have certainly loosened up since the war.

Awesome job!

ahah! that's great. i love how you showed both sides of the story. that's so adorable! and i love how crazy duo is, and the silent hill reference. i could totally picture trowa angsting in a lazy boy.

Oh, this story is so funny! It's really nice to see the other bits from the previous story resolved in here as well.

Gah, I should have read this one before Quatre's perspective. 'Cause that puzzle thing was a little vague and left me a little confused after I read Quatre's POV.

But very cool, and very funny. Love the image of Duo pretending to be psycho!obsessed!crazed!Wufei with the newspaper as a weapon.

I read the other fic and then this one and I love them both. the sheer...wierd ness and yet totally normal-ness of the four of them in Heero's apartment, it's perfect. I love the way you write them together, its fantastic.

xD!! I love it ever bit of it =D ur amazing

A good storyteller always leaves them wanting more.

Damned evil! And so very true... >.

I like this part more than the other, but I appreciate the other appearing X3 Would love even if this continued. But really I'm commenting to say how much I appreciate you being able to write guys being guys. I noticed this in some of your other fics I peeked at too. You give each of them a pretty distinct voice, and there's good chemistry here.

Oh, this and it's counterpart story were absolutely fantastic!

Okay, first off I must praise you! This was refreshing to read after a whole series of 1x2 fics. It seems that there are so few stories centered around this couple (although they are in the background of plenty others!) So thanks for writing a good one! As for advice on improving your style, it's all just my opinion. I don't see Wu Fei the way you portrayed him, and I tend to object to using "baka" in reference to Duo because Heero doesn't ever speak Japanese in the series (well, he does in the original non-dub, but that's because it was produced in Japan and not because he is of Japanese heritage). However, I love that you have actually made Duo smart here, instead of the hyperactive stereotype that haunts his image. So like I said, my criticisms are all my opinion/preference. There is nothing here that screams OOC or bad. Your style is just fine.

Now, the real reason I'm reviewing this is because the last few lines sparked another one-shot idea in my mind. Now, I don't know if you take requests, but if you're interested I would love to see a one-shot where Duo takes his own advice and "just does Heero".

But if you don't, that is okay. I just thought it would be a great addition ^_^

Great job, again!

~SC

What a lovley two piece of fanfic! Can honestly say that I thought it to be both very sweet and hilarous. Must say that the second piece (this one) was my favourite with the interaction btw the boys, but without the first one it wouldn't have been so good. Love your idea of writing from two views with Duo the all-knowing, hope you continue writing!
//EB

If your style can be improved upon, the suggestion won't come from me. I loved this. Duo's my favorite character, but I rarely get to see him as I picture him. he hides his insecurities and true feelings behind a lauging smiling public persona that throws people off their gaurd. He's been quite entertaining in both installments. I'd love for this to be continued. To see if Trowa and Quatre can work things out, if Duo and Heero will admit their feelings, and by god, poor Wufei needs some attention! Also, I love when all of the G-boys get together, your scene in the kitchen was priceless. Very in character, I love that their personalities feed off of each other so well. Anyway...Thanks for the laughs.

I Love It! Very well written and goes along nicely as a companion piece.

I really loved the talks between Duo, Trowa, Heero and Wufei! Your really good at writing good fics! Your one of my favourite writers!

I love this, I love it! I had no idea there was a companion piece to the first one, will there be another? I'd love to see the tables turned on Duo!