please come out from under your bed! =P
this was freaking hilarious! =D
hahahahahahahha! i love it.

I've read this fic a couple times and Renji's final line that sets off the powder keg is effectively wonderful every read. Great work. I really love Rangiku's knowing slyness in this.

I must have circled back to this story a hundred times. It's just that good. But I've never paused to review it, and for that, I apologize.

It's a story more than deserving praise. The punchlines are silly, but you carry it off so well that it doesn't feel cheap or tawdry. Most everyone else would earn a snort of laughter, but you make it uproarious. The crowning achievement comes in the fact that I don't think it's too hard to see Rangiku and Renji acting like that.

It's glorious.

Ah! I loved it! I was trying not to laugh the whole time! XD
Good job!

omg that was awsome lmao i love renji =) well great oneshot

OMG! I haven't laughed that hard in AGES!
You are a mean, mean person and I absolutely love it!

LOL! that was awesome. and funny. i really enjoyed reading it. can u please write more hitsuhina stories? i love your writing.

Yeah, I had a fun time reading this, all the suggestive comments and all. Great work~

You WIN AT LIFE! EPIC WIN!! That was so freaking awesome like you have no IDEA! (or maybe you do XD)

I was cracking up the entire time, seriously, this was FANTASTIC! The ending was EXCELLENT, and the Hitsugaya torture, ROFL! He just makes it too easy! XDD

Thank you for the laughs, and for writing this ^^

~Téa

rofl
This was PRICELESS :D
Seriously, Renji's first line was totally unexpected and a great addition.
Thanks for the giggles :3

i love the writing. This is definately going on me favorites. i liked how it builded up and just crashed down when renji said that. keep up the good work.

OMG.

Ok, I hate hate hate HitsuHina. I am using the word HATE here. I could not hate it more.

...but that wur funnerz. XD

Ah, gotta love my girl Matsu. And Renji with the back-breaking straw...classic. XD

xD okay, you're on my favorite authors list. love the last three lines the most xD

Poor Hitsugaya, the object of so much teasing. Though he could use a little lightening up I dare say. Nice little story.

LOL I LOVE THIS! it was so sweet and hitsuhina filled that i prectically squeeled with joy. of course, that had to be the best ending for a oneshot EVER!