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Full Shadow Alchemist
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseLOL I LOVE THIS! it was so sweet and hitsuhina filled that i prectically squeeled with joy. of course, that had to be the best ending for a oneshot EVER!
Sabriel41
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuse...I bit my knuckle to keep from laughing. Oh, Renji...

Loved the banter, the innuendo, the easy camaraderie, and the complete lack of angst; it's nice to catch this set of characters in a happier moment.

Cheers,
~Sabe.
shackleton
2008-01-22
ch 1,
abuseHA! hahahhaha. renji.
Arina Kusajishi
2007-12-20
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHA THAT WAS SO FUNNY!
Heronica
2007-12-20
ch 1,
abuseYou made my mouth and sides hurt from laughing too much! Grr upon you! I shall now proceed to glomp you to death for writing such a terrific story.

Haha, Renji. Haha.
tuathafaerie
2007-12-14
ch 1,
abuseSo hilarious! Oh, the smiting! (That is good vocabulary use right there.) ;) Thanks for such an enjoyable read! +C2!
Katty008
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abuseWay to go Renji. You're dragon dung.
Ishimaru Miwa
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseOMG! This is so cute! Couldn't stop laughing throughout the whole reading of the fanfic... Great Job! Write more!!
kaotic312
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseI LOVED IT! Oh my, poor Hitsugaya. Bad Renji (course, I'd do him). LOL
frostedheavens
2007-08-12
ch 1,
abuseHitsugaya's reactions were so cute!! I take my hat off to Rangiku and Renji (and Hisagi,though i still don't know who this character is,lol). And to you too!!
Toushiro's my favourite character in Bleach,so you can imagine how overjoyed i was to find TWO stories featuring him with Hinamori - by the same wonderful author. :D
Geez,i'm rambling so much i'm late for church now. Blame it on my cut-off from fanfiction for 2 whole days while on holiday. ^_~
Vires-Strength
2007-08-11
ch 1,
abuseOMG, i don't knowe if i feel more sorry for Hitsugaya or Renji!!XD ::tries to stop laughing long enough to breath:: this was great!!
always lost123
2007-08-03
ch 1,
abuseomg XDXDXDXDXDXDXD love it! XDXDXDXD i love the ending! uhoh i woke up my mom damn XDXDXDXD need to stop laughing hurts ow T.T XDXDXDXDXDXD
Namimakura
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseno need to hide, really! they'll be far too many of us clapping you on the back for this amazingly hilarious story... *giggles incessantly* i'm fairly certain i just woke up everyone in my house with my ridiculous fit of giggles... and for being written from the middle this thing is awesome...

trust me... it's hilarious... *is still laughing* wow... i totally should have read this ages ago... *laughs more*

totally... in a nondemanding way... you should write more of these amazing humorous fanfics... because they are just that awesome... *wanders off now to laugh even more*
Starlette Fallon
2007-06-16
ch 1,
abuseI have to admit, I was laughing silently to myself throughout this piece. All the innuendo, and your ability to sprinkle in just enough of poor Hitsugaya's reactions to keep me amused - I mean, WOW. Hilarious. But the ending, with Renji's (last) words...

Oh goodness. I'm not exaggerating when I say that I did a face-plant, right into my desk, when I read that part. I think I hurt myself I was laughing so damn hard. It was perfection, to say the least. Bravo!
G0.0dbye-days
2007-06-10
ch 1,
abuseLOL!
So funny... Poor Hitsugaya!
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