This is a very good, very well-written story you have here. ^^ I hate to admit it, but I rarely stray from yaoi-related stories in the Anime/Manga section, but yours caught my eye--and held it there. Wonderful work, and I'll have to finish reading the chapters later.

Interesting to see that you've written an indirect 'yaoi' scene in the previous chapter. For this chapter, it's nice to see the other female characters besides Nasami take center stage and get acknowledged as possible heroes who could maybe save Nasami.

I have more feedback but I'll PM it.

Waah, this is so tense! I love it but I'm so sad for Kambei, Nasami and Kyuzo!! I'm on edge waiting to see what happens next. Great writing as you always do. I look forward to reading more!!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

incredible

Yay, another chapter!! The suspense is well...tense. I guess that's the point, huh? Anyways, incredible chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Poor Kambei, poor Nasami, and Kyuzo...being Kyuzo. ^_^ Great work as you always do!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

Hiya! I don't think I've written a review for you on before, and hence, I will start. :3

While I have some minor personal disagreements with Kyuuzo's motives for wanting to fight Kambei in the end (in death), I can still definitely keep in touch with his specific motives in THIS story, in order to benefit the entire arc for tSotS. Therefore, it, uh... it's damn well pretty amazing.

The last few lines... uh, it's... *breathes*... good lord, woman.

Angry!Kyuuzo for the win! I hope you will keep the succession of this fic to continue. Continue SOON. XD

love,
- morgan

Holy crap.

I loved this chapter and I really can't wait for the next one!
It would be great if you could update soon!
Later

Wow, another tense chapter. I'm loving it! It kind of suck for all three of them really. I love how you want to sympathize with them all. Great work on the emotions. I know I'm sitting on the edge of my seat when I read this. Wonderful writing!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

you know? I´m a person that search for videos or images in the same time that I read a story, but when I begane to read the chapter 4 I was just not wanting to even close my eyes for a second,the idea of kyuzo there as a spirit make me live agane, you know I´m very cold person but I cry when kyuzo die, I realy cry, and I still cry when I remenber him.

when I look at that chapter I wanted to kill katzushiro, just for shooting and I know that is not hes fault, but I realy wanted to kill him, and this may sounds silly but I realy love kyuzo, I fall in love with hes personality.

I have never cry for anybody in my entire life, but I dit cry for kyuzo, manny menbers of my family have die and I have never cry for then but I cry for him, and he is not even real... well look at this I have just tell you everything in my heart and I don´t even know you, well update soon I hope you give me a word or something,you have my email well good bye.

attentively: fatima...

Wow, now that was an incredible chapter. I loved it and all the emotions running through it. I'm sitting at the edge of my seat. Great work!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

I'm chomping at the bit wondering what's going to happen to everybody. Seriously, the suspense is so much fun!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

I am seriously loving this the more I read. The drama and tension is great. Wonderful writing!

~NarcissisticRiceBall

Though its sad, I really love it and cant wait for an update,
See ya!

I had no idea you updated this!
Poor Nasami; she's got her work cut out for her in trying to stop Kyuzo.