amazing. that's all i have to say...

I have no idea where you got the impression that this fanfic was less than stellar, but rest assured that you're wrong! I loved reading it, and I think you captured the voices of all the characters wonderfully. Other than a few typos here and there, the writing itself was terrific-very succinct, yet sufficiently descriptive. It's especially impressive because you're so young. You have quite a gift, and I'm certain that if you ever decide to pursue a professional writing career, you will succeed. My best to you, and thank you for sharing this excellent story!

COOL!

Amazing does not cover this story at all! It was very well written and insightful. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

What an incredible story you've written! I've loved your insight and depth of plot you've captured. I was so entranced that I somehow managed to read it all in 3 days LOL! I hope you are loving your Senior year and I can't wait to see what else you've written!

i absolutely loved this story, and i love your edward. he just makes so much sense, you know? i originally thought i wouldn't like it for two reasons, first because i can't read the first chapter of midnight sun and so was starting on chapter two, and second because it was a retelling of a story i'd already read. but you gave it so much, it was just wonderful. thank you.

Its kind of too bad that a "seemingly nice" girl like Jessica ended up being two-faced and petty. She probably was planning her move toward popularity since before Bella came here. Bella is just a mere stepping stone for her.

Too bad though. i do like Angela though. i wonder what she would do if she knew Jessica's true nature.

Keep up the good work. I think one of my fav scenes from the movie and book is the trip to Port Angeles. How romantic like a new age Superman.

Best EPOV I've read (aside from SM of course). Really really good.

“So she’s not dead?” er hello? what did i just say lol :)

My favorite; it was a sweet and slightly fruity, - omg lol!! my fav sauce tastes exactly like that! its like you would eat with chinese!! hehe. i have the same tastebuds as edward cullen!! okay that sounds wierd... :)

Sighing, I answered, “Because I don’t see how someone who has killed so many lives can possibly be destined for anywhere else. Because I have killed so many lives – not even just human, either, but so many creatures – that I see no hope for redemption.” i feel so sorry for edward! what he doesnt realise is that humans eat animals aswell. just because they dont physically kill them themselves, but they still eat them so :S. aww poor edward!

aww!! he loves bella! i am nearly crying!!

i seriously love this story!

omg this is a really good start to it!!
haha i love it already!

i have just spent the last two days completely lost in reveling in this story. i've only discovered Twilight fan fiction in the last few weeks, after years of reading Harry Potter fics. My particular hunger in Twilight fics is anything from Edward's point of view, since we never get that in canon. i have loved the depth of this story, the emotion, the interactions with all the Cullens, their bonds of love for each other. i hate to say this, but there is so much depth in your writing, that i was honestly surprised when I realized you were a high school person when writing this. all the story was beautiful. For the record, I too, loved Breaking Dawn and think it's the best in the series after twilight, though I've come to like Eclipse a lot as well. I don't like Jacob, or didn't till Breaking Dawn, but i'm well past my 30's, and to me he was an obnoxious and immature boy. I particularly wanted charlie to arrest him in Eclipse when he forcibly kissed bella! But in BD, particularly during the second part, I really liked him, so i ended up liking him overall.

i'm sorry you don't feel up to finishing the series from edward's point of view, because i so want to read more of the story from him, and particularly more of your wonderful writing, but I understand needing a break from such a long and involved project. Good luck to you in your future and with any writing you do.

sherry

try capturing everyone's character properly atleast carlisle's.

Sunrise is absolutely wonderful. You make great work on this fanfiction. Did you thought about writing New Moon from Edward POV?
I think all ppl who read Sunrise would be more then happy. I know I would.
Greetings

I must admit that I'm no stranger to fan fiction. The story that you wrote here had a depth and it seems that were you really did capture Edward's soul and wrote it out. Good luck on future writing, I really enjoyed this.