I liked the descriptions of Eliwood's past, but I think you made Lyndis too OOC. She blushes almost everytime, and that's not her style.
That said, Eliwood seemed fairly well represented.
Good continuations.

:D


I'm glad it's finally finished. This is quite the sizable accomplishment. Once again, congratulations!

A good ending. Though personally speaking, I was hoping this would go on until after the battle with Nergal. However this was an extremely great story and very heart warming. If you ever write a sequel to this you can count on me reading it.

And once again, it was nicely done.

I'll be the first to say that this was a heartwarming story that ended on a good note. :) It ends with a vow of protection and everlasting love, and although the battle against Nergal and the Black Fang is painted red with uncertainity, everything seems like it will work out for the better. Or at least, that's how you conveyed it to me. Bravo. :D

Wait, this isn't the last chapter... Where did it go? I thought it said one more or something...

The dead man returns!

I'm so incredibly sorry about the whole thing where I didn't get to finish reviewing your story. I've had a long... However long its been. New house, new family members, and a lot of... Yeah. Point is, I'm back!

I can't believe I missed the updated LAST CHAPTER! Can't wait to read it!

Com on, great story, must... Have... new... chapter

can't wait to the next chapter =)

ooh! X3 that is so cute X3! i love *eli-lyn* XD!

Great chapter. Is hector going to burst the door open. I'm laughing at just imagining what the expression on his face is going to be.

You said you'd update by the end of the month it's already July are you going to be updating it soon and regularly. I mean I love this fic it's just that waiting for a year for an update is a little frustrating. But I'm glad updated it

Typos I noticed:

"I guess I’ll have to wait for her to approach me, because if I do, she’ll probably run away from me, or faint."

I think you meant "if I don't" instead of "if I do".

"She sighed tiredly once she had calmed down. I had happened again. That blasted dream that just wouldn’t leave her alone, and it was always about the same…"

I think you meant "It had happened again." instead of "I had happened again."


Overall, another fine chapter, sorry that I my last review I thought the fanfic was over, seems I was mistaken xD

Keep it up! =D

I remember reading this story a few months before I had joined FFN and I absolutely adored it. But when I finally did join, I was unable to find it again. I'm glad to see that this fic has finally been updated (considering that I'm a fan of the pairing). :D

I'm not going to drone on about everything, but it's a well-done romantic fic. Delving into Eliwood and Lyn's backstories adds depth to their relationship and ultimately gives the pair something to bond over. The build-up to their romance was done in a plausible manner, so don't worry about how long it took to get there. ;)

Also, the side-stories dealing with the intimacy of some of the troops were enjoyable. I personally enjoyed seeing Sain (the chief womanizer) interfere with Kent and Fiora's own relationship. :)

Finally, although you claim to be inadequate with your English usage, I've found few grammatical mistakes throughout the story, so you can't be too bad, right? ;)

An excellent job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Very nice conclusion to the story, I enjoyed reading this, keep up the good work!

Great chapter

Psh i wouldn't have known english wasn't your first language if you didn't say it. A few grammer mistakes aren't that bad, (i make more than you and my language is english) Great how you gave the backrounds of them, adds some nice... like a subtle depth kinda.