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| flipping pages 2008-08-16 ch 16,  | abuseThis is a great story, hope you continue. I find it odd Harry would forgive Sirius for saying such a thing as he would leave him for his friends, and he didn't even apologize! grr...bad Sirius! Anyway, update soon plz! |
| Ugly.Beautiful 2008-08-05 ch 16, | abuseAw... I think 'Harry goes back in time' are my new favorite type of Harry Potter fics. And this one is kinda different that other ones, so that's, like, totally cool! Lol. This is the first SiriusxHarry for me though, and you should be pleased to note, that I adore it! I completely blame you. XP One thing though, there are a few typos that are just getting on my nerves. In the beginning chapters (I didn't notice so much in the later ones, though maybe I was just used to it) you wrote 'your' when you really meant 'you're'. 'Your' shows ownership, while 'you're' = 'you are'. Probably someone told you this, but I thought, if they hadn't... Lol. The only other thing that annoyed my was in Chapter 1 or 2 (really early) you wrote 'thy' instead of 'thigh'. 'Thy' means 'your'. 'Thigh' is the body part between you hip and your knee. Thought you might need to know that since our two boys seem to be getting along. For now, anyways. Anyways, now that this review is so long, I leave, saying: I look forward to the next chapter! |
| black lili rose potter 2008-07-31 ch 16, | abusegreat carry on please i like it alot yay :) |
| amandalupin 2008-07-30 ch 16, | abusethis was a cute chapter. poor amos! i cant wait for the next chapter |
| Serpent91 2008-07-27 ch 16, | abuseLove this! |
| hide1961 2008-07-25 ch 16, | abuseYou end last chapter with a hot kiss,and end this one with a happy afternoon. Can I expect you write more snogging ? I really love the last two chapter,they are so sweet! |
| Emprison 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abusedude THAT was awesome! when harry got put into hufflepuff was a big shocker and a bit of a let-me-down cause their not one of my favorites but got better can't wait for your next update! |
| ubiekins 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abuseThat was amazing. It was really sad that Amos was hurt, but finally some Sirius and Harry action. I find it amusing that Harrt still loses at chess too. Anyway, great job and I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| riseofafallenangel 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abuseyup drama is awesome and YAY! Harry and Sirius are so sweet. I just kept going aw at the end. great chapter. more soon? |
| Sylkie 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abuseThat last bit was a little sad. I felt Moony was neglected...lol. I guess he would be really happy though when he's surrounded by his pack. Very sweet. :) |
| Katsy17 2008-07-24 ch 16, | abusenice chapter :) |
| blondie1765 2008-07-23 ch 16, | abuselove it so far absolutely can't wait for an update |
| crystalbladedragon 2008-07-23 ch 16, | abuseaw, hehe i love the last scene that was cute :) and i'm glad u updated! yay!, hope the next chap is just as good and i bet it will be! |
| rekahneko 2008-07-23 ch 16, | abusePoor Amos, but I don't feel too bad. He will find someone else, eventually. (-8 Cute chapter! |
| Calex 2008-07-09 ch 15, anon. | abuseplease update soon:) |