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| cast14 2006-10-05 ch 1,  | abusegreat story hope you will write more stories like this one they would be great this story was very interesting and a little sad too |
| hanyou-elf 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abusethis had the potential to be so much better than what it came out as. you're story has a really good, interesting plot and i really would have liked to see more emotion within this story, rather than the factual storyline you have written here. it has the potential to be so much better. please, email me if you'd like some help on how to do it, i'd be more than happy to offer my suggestions personally, rather then in an email. other than that, you had a very good story idea and impressive creativity within this story. ja ne ~hanyou-elf |
| Zacc 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it, but you know I am about these homesexual fics. I think that you should add an addition to this story with the Hidden Leaf Village asking Sasuke to become Hokage in the memory and the need of Naruto's spirit. Because Sasuke has developed a spirit channelling justu that will let him take on the form of the Nine tails demon that had been resealed into Naruto in his after life Guardianship of the village |