 Stitch Phantom 2006-10-18 . chapter 1Hey, Cosplay... I hope you don't consider this a flame... but I... have this to say. Try to use capital letters in your fics... it would kind of help if you did that. That's all I've got to say... you're getting better with using the enter key. :D Oh yeah, think maybe you could use my Rescue Team in the fic? Here are the names of the members:
Phantom (Skitty... smaller than normal with purple markings)
Rocky (Ivysaur... likes rocks and wears a necklace with three rocks attached to it.. as well as having a few rock shaped markings)
Chaos (Absol... his left hind paw is smaller than normal... thus it slows him down a little... and he has a bit of a bad luck streak... as well as having a crush on Phantom)
Together, they make up Team Lilytail. :D |