Great story. Would love to read a sequel.

aw it was so good. and i really want there to be a sequal...but...as curious as i am about the rest of harry and severus' life together, i think it ended perfectly. they were together and everything was perfect. we already know that they'd be together no matter what and we already know that they'll have kids so there is no mystery in it i guess. my over active imagination is just wondering things like, how many boys they will have and many girls they have and what there home looks like. but my imagination is fine wondering all this, because i already know sort of how their story goes. hm
great job i loved every minuete of it.

Damn, don't think I've ever read a crack!fic that was so long before. Really amusing in places and you seriously got all of the cliches in there good.
Can't decide who was my favorite. Naive, girlish, submissive Harry. Cold and ugly Snape that suddenly has a heart and becomes handsome after his crush on the BWL is revealed? Twinkly Albus that actually thinks it's a good idea to marry an underage Harry off to a Death Eater spy:D Or Sirius and Remus, who predictably protest but give in to the demands of letting Snivellus marry their precious Harry.
Actually think my favorite was Harry actually wearing a garter, tiara and veil at his wedding! MY GOD!
Am amazed how much effort you put into this. Usually crack!fics are rather badly written, but this is while not subtle at least well thought out.
You should consider writing a serious multi-chaptered fic as well!

Cheers!

AWESOME!

well done loved this fan fiction if i had a hat i would take it off and salute you


by the way sorry this is anonymous but i cant log in lol

WELL DONE WITH FANFIC

uh...you misspelled shirt

Wow... Where to start? Usually I do not read fanfics. In fact I found this one quite by accident, I was looking up the song "Malchike Guy" by typing in the lyrics "won't you please stay with me" to google and came up with this instead. When I saw that it was about Snarry, I couldn't resist a peek. When it comes to fanfics, I tend find them boring, or I can't get into them because they're just too far away from the...reality, if you will, of the original story. Your story had that same problem, and yet, I couldn't stop reading it. I continuously stared at my computer for a good two hours straight, my family was concerned. Your story was intriguing, to say the least. I laughed and I had a good time with it. Although, my mind kept trying to picture Harry and Snape together and now I will forever be haunted/plagued by the image of Daniel Radcliffe and Alan Rickman kissing... At first I was squealing with joy but in retrospect, I know that it will bring on several nightmares and possibly some intense therapy. Still, your story was good and has given me a more positive outlook on fanfics. You have some real talent, and I can't wait to read more of your work. There were some grammar and spelling mistakes, but all minor stuff. I probably wouldn't have noticed them myself, but I'm a little anal about things like that. Awesome job, keep up the good work!

I loved this story!i love severus and harry together their a cute couple!

I think you have done a wounderful job with this story and I hope you will eather finish it or write a sequil for it is one story that is diffrent from others that I have read but a really good one at that and would like to know what else happens or if there is a sequil to it.

Sincerely
Saphieralynn

Absolutely amazing. You are, by far, one of my most favorite Snarry authors. I'd love to read a sequel!

A very good story, just like harry to think of others before himself. hoping that you will tell what will happen next.

have you written a sequal yet? this really deserves one! you write really well. please, it would make my day if you did one!

aw that was awsome!!

I hope there is a sequel!

this is a good story