Reviews for The Gems of Hoenn

Jose 2006-10-10 ch 2, anon.	abuseOK, I'm sorry to say this, but you should liven things up by a lot. It's not interesting enough. THe only mention of Pokemon was probably in the first chapter, Persian. You should focus more on adventures. THen people might enjoy this.
Jose 2006-10-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseIt's kind of confusing, but also detailed. It's best if you focus on only a few characters, say maybe 3 or 4. Otherwise, it's hard to follow. THe part with Kamon's was detailed and spooky, which is good.