Oh holy crap! that was terrific you should definitely finish it!I loved it so much. I think your getting better with your writing.

good story line

Aww... so sad!! But not in a bad way. Very skillfully done, this chapter is even better than the last one!

Like the idea and love the writing. I wonder why Ella's mums doing this to her though, maybe she thinks she's doing her a favor. Maybe Ella will fly.
Also no way is this a one shot.
Update soon,
Billy

She sure didn't resist well.
happiness?
Good Luck
Samantha

*sob*
That was terribly sad...but oh, so powerful.

That was quite sad...I want for fluff. If you continue this you should have Ella escape and search for the flock for help. They could form an attck...?
Good Luck
Samantha

I like it. And I definitely think you should continue, but probably with the girl being 16 or 17. Stories about 14 years olds (because there are so many) are beginning to get tiresome.

Uh, I dont know how old you should make the girl, but I definatley think this would be a great story. It was sad, but I liked it. Update soon, if you decide to continue!

Definitely continue! There is no WAY that was a oneshot!! Make her 14 - the same age as the other three. I like the pathetic fallacy of the rain, which is a good thing for anyone who doesnt know what that is. Your descriptions are beautiful, keep up the good work!

*cry*
So...sad...
But great, as usual. Seriously, you are an awesome writer.

Uhm...I think...hm...14. Yeah. 14. I like that age for mutant-bird-kids. Y'know...if ages for mutant-bird-kids can be liked.