 amy 2009-08-18 . chapter 11 Pls update soon! |
 Fei Lan Lim 2008-09-20 . chapter 11Where is FyeYuuko pairing? Please don't go overboard when make Watanuki's angry, i think Watanuki start to tolerate Yuuko's behavior every now n then and Yuuko has some soft spot on Watanuki too. Just as shown in chapter 144 or XHOLiC 12.
I think Yuuko has some manner, too. Not all the time to anyone she become very rude, just to gather information (just watch XHOliC anime season 1). She knows manner and polite (most of the time). She even corrects Kurogane's manner when Kurogane become rude at their first meeting.
If Yuuko is all demanding and annoying (how would anyone fall in lvoe with her then? Esp. Fye) and Watanuki is all temper (how could Yuuko call him a good kid, if he's all mad??),
I won't fall in love with XHOLiC, esp. Yuuko. So, please make Yuuko a little more soft-hearted and Watanuki's a bit more patient/mature toward Yuuko/Doumeki. IT"LL BE GREAT!! THANKS! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Fei Lan Lim 2008-09-20 . chapter 9Honestly, when I read Fye said if Tomoyo could hire YUUKO. I was, like, OMG! UNBELIEVABLE! Yuuko isn't the type of person who could bow down to someone like Tomoyo, let alone convince by her (compromise might happen). It's just so easy to imagine Yuuko's on top of the world. YOU ROCKZ NIGHT FOLIAGE! BCOS I thought I'm the only one who love FYEYuuko pairing...and I just started the fanfic bout those two, but ur ahead of me. SO...keep goin' PALZ. XD
(p.s. I also love Yuuwata) |
 xXBLooDyRoSe 2007-10-07 . chapter 11Awesome chapter. I want more Yuuko and Fai. Please update as soon as you can. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Herald Heyhay 2007-09-13 . chapter 11WONDERFUL!! haha ok but u need to update more cause i need more... i need yuuko and fai NOW!! YEAH!! haha one thing to add... try to keep your descriptions of things even. like one min. everthing is in fine detail and the next i cant get a picture of anything that is going on in the story... so yeah :P great story! |
 Herald Heyhay 2007-09-11 . chapter 2ok another good chapter... not as good as the first but still better than some fics on the internet.. haha
anyways, i really enjoyed the "search engine" part of the chapter. it was a very original way to write... |
 Herald Heyhay 2007-09-11 . chapter 1BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL... ok time to get serious... i really liked the beginning and how u opened the story. it was a very different start then i would have expected and thats good...
one thing to look out for is grammar and spelling mistakes... u didn't have a lot but those tiny mistakes can really ruin the rythm of reading... (wow that was like, a lot of rs... ok :P)
so yeah, overall a good beginning... i also know u wrote this a year ago, BUT I DONT CARE!! YAY! |
 WildfireDreams 2007-08-10 . chapter 11interesting |
 RandomCreepyHappyFan 2007-02-04 . chapter 11Yes! AN UPDATE!
You made me very happy!
And secrets... Eh Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh... What kind of past is it... |
 GreenFairyHime 2007-01-08 . chapter 10Ah ha, I loved the "Jump. Leap. Spin."-part, it sounds so like Watanuki! And I'm gonna keep waiting for the modeling aprt! ^^
I lost my will to write for sometime, but it came back later though. That sort of things tend to happen, so don't take any stress because of them! ^^ |
 RandomCreepyHappyFan 2007-01-07 . chapter 10Ohh...
YAY! ^^
An update!
Thank you! |
 Jacceh 2006-12-18 . chapter 9Hey interesting pairing...please, do update...I really want to know what happens next.. |
 xXBLooDyRoSe 2006-11-24 . chapter 9I can't wait. ^.^ |
 GreenFairyHime 2006-11-20 . chapter 9Ooh, I wanna see Yuuko-san modelling, so cool...! >.< I'm looking forward to have more of this! ^^ |
 RandomCreepyHappyFan 2006-11-18 . chapter 9YAY! Another chapter! |