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| s 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good writing... i liked it |
| phi4858 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseHow dark this piece is contrarely to this summer outside. I've read this fic on another board and still I'm a little shocked thinking of Sark killing Sydney to end her fate. Or am I wrong? I never thought she could loose it like that always drunken and self-pitying herself. When she's in tears what is she talking about or better to whom is she talking? You left us to our imagination. Dark but well. Of course I prefer more hope. |
| Muddy Poodle 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWow...nice job on setting up the scene and way to hang it at a cliff hanger! Great first chapter! |