I'm in awe. Such a tragic side that's a beautiful kind of sad to see. Thank you.

you made me cry ...

WAH!

Wow.

That was very intense.

I liked it.

Good job.

Wow, this story is absolutely beautiful. All of the details are perfect, the shelf of notes, the keyblade duels the boys have, the stars as worlds, even the appearances of Namine and Roxas. You really used amazing descriptions as to how the characters feel about all of this, and I love our work.

I think it's kind of funny; Kairi does eventually get a Keyblade, but she only uses it for all of five minutes, and never to fight the same fight as Sora. And I get the feeling that her boys won't let her use it again, they wouldn't want to put her at risk.

Great work, this is amazing!

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Ah, so angstful O.o But that doesn't mean it wasn't good. ;] It was so incredible. I loved how you described them, so numb to their feelings and cold and..gone. And at the end, where they finally break a little. :) I enjoyed reading this a lot..and eep! Sorry this review is so late. I kinda just found it. xP But, anyway, I can't really critique this any ('cause its so good and stuff) so I'll just leave it at that! :)

aww man. u're always so good at things. ;_;

Excellent. Very sad to think of their lives falling apart like that, but you did a great job.

I cried. That was beautiful.

I read this a couple of days ago, but I couldn't review. So I'm reviewing now!

I love this fic, just love it, love it, love it. The angst is great, and the dash of fluff also worked really well.

KEEP WRITING!

Sad. Very nice though. Another amazing piece. Perfect, as usual. :)

Ah the angst involved with being a hero and being at King Mickey's beck and call. You wrote a beautiful one-shot here. It turns KH into something more then an enjoyable game and adds an aura of dark sadness to those three most beloved of characters. "Sora, Riku and Kairi because they were Keywielders and she's not..." I loved that line. What am I saying? I loved the entire thing!

yeah, Sokai is always so tragic... They both need each other but King Mickey is just an evil jerk. XD ... And I just love how you write. I wish I could write as good as you do. You just capture everyone's personalities so well. _ anyways, this was a very very good oneshot! Keep Writing!

this is so sad!

you captured Kairi's emotions perfectly!

everyone seems to make sora out to be an eternally optimistic hero, but i think you showed his true feelings and emotions.

Great story!

Write more soon!