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GallagherGirl537 1/23/12 . chapter 7
please finish
LoveMeant2BE 1/6/12 . chapter 7
i love it... why wont you updat... you make me sad
Sunshine-Midnight123 7/28/11 . chapter 7
This is a really good!
GalanthaDreams 8/21/10 . chapter 6
"Because… I uh- kinda… like… you," Definitely a have-to-smile moment :)
AngelOfDeath07 7/23/10 . chapter 7
Hello!

I just read all 7 chapters and I am loving this.

I like reading Derek's thoughts and how he tells the story in his own way. He can be so funny plus I like the idea how they were together when they first met.

Update soon please, please, please

Deanie
fille de soleil 8/16/08 . chapter 7
Oh, I love this story! D/C stories are always better told from Derek's point of view, I think, because Casey is so up-tight about everything (and it's kind of like reading my own mind's reactions to stuff, lol).

Anyway, please write more when you can, I'll be watching for it!

-Sunshinegirl
wprincessannw 7/20/08 . chapter 7
lol more please, I like ur story - but it might make their relationship more realistic if the teasing was a little more...teasing instead of so mean. I hope you continue!
southerncharm22 4/26/08 . chapter 7
OH MY GOD! I'm so glad you updated. :)

How did I forget how completely AMAZING this story is?

Your characterization of Derek is so spot-on, but yet I think you have made him a hundred times better. Both he and Casey are completely your own while still keeping them in-character. It's a perfect balance of in-character and an original twist.

I think I laughed, and had to quote you so that people knew why, through the entire chapter. How you've gotten so... I can't really find the words I'm looking for, but you did it.

Your writing just blows me away. It's all the little things that just make it sparkle. Things I think others look over that give your story such a realistic edge that is just so refreshing.

I know your personal life has had an effect on your time to write, but it did not have an effect on your writing. You really are gifted and I hope to see more chapters soon. :)
Shortie91 3/1/08 . chapter 7
haha u have 2 update sn i cant wait 2 c wat happens keep up the gd work : )
Livin-in-a-fairytale 12/17/07 . chapter 1
update!
princetongirl 8/15/07 . chapter 7
loved it update soon
prozac.will.be.my.nation 8/15/07 . chapter 7
Uh-oh.

Derek better find a good hiding place.

Haha.
RAWR-IKICKBUTT 7/11/07 . chapter 7
ROFL ROFL ROFL.

i absolutely love it so far.

I did find one mistake though,

you said the waiter was italian?

uhm, senorita and senor is spanish

lol. signore and signora is italian.

anyways, apart from that, very well

written ) !
iwannabethefirstme 7/9/07 . chapter 7
love it amazing rly update soon
Mrs-Jasper-Whitlock-Hale-4evr 6/20/07 . chapter 7
totally cool! but you should update soon i mean come on its been almost 2 months already!
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