The first part was poetic but very confusing but patience was rewarded- this was a stunning read. The bit at the end was exceptionally interesting- Anna in David's body? There's a story in that I think...

Thankyou for the story, it was a great read.

Very creepy, I liked it.

*nods his approval and then is gone*

I liked this. Why don't you take another hit and write a sequel? I didn't find it weird, but after reading some of my stories you may not find that very comforting.

*Wonderful* story! Intensely frightening and fabulously dark...I love it! The

writing is superb, the structure is intoxicating...it's incredible!