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Vi-Violence
2008-12-08 . chapter 10
glad to see you updated
DPF
2008-11-05 . chapter 10
I really like this story and wish you would finish it. The writing is good and the story engaging. It should be finished.
dArkliTe-sPirit
2008-06-11 . chapter 10
Well, let's hope not.

By the way, I stick to my original accusation that the preacher is a demon - I mean, he's just too sick to be human.
Invader Johnny
2008-06-09 . chapter 10
WOOT! I been waiting for this! THANK YOU! Well its defenatelly a good thing that the damn preacher got caught and the girl“s family got some closure.

Hope the next chapter doesnt take too long for you to post.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
lazyreader19
2008-01-17 . chapter 9
I read your lemon tea series, finally.

Its very good, I love it.

Keep it up!
Invader Johnny
2007-08-31 . chapter 9
Ah so the flashback continues.

So whatever is killing the animals is out for revenge, and it is a demon, no wait a ghost... yup a ghost is involved in this.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
dArkliTe-sPirit
2007-08-31 . chapter 9
THE REVEREND IS A DEMON! I'LL SWEAR TO IT!
Em Phantom
2007-08-23 . chapter 8
i hope you get the chance to update soon! and maybe also, you should have someone like Danny in the town for some reason, like his dad heard about the ghosts and wanted to investigate. So the whole family would be there, and then Danni would on day see Danny, but think she was seeing things, and then the Fentons sent Danny to go to the Lemon store place to get some ghost books, and Kay would have Danni get them, and then when she returned, she'd be face to face with Danny. both would be shocked, and then there would be this touching moment that Kay would instantly get suspicious of, or something like that. it'd be interesting to say the least. The story is great though!

~Emily
dArkliTe-sPirit
2007-04-20 . chapter 8
So, this is how the Bishop came...I'm willing to bet he was involved in Williams' death.
Invader Johnny
2007-03-31 . chapter 8
Wow, the death of a Reverend... that's kinda new in any sort of fan fic of any part of this site.

I mean barely anyone brings up religion so I guess that putting this isn't entirely odd... And surely Danielle is feeling devastated as she hear this story?.

The Bishop?... ya mean the faceless ghost? He was once a HUMAN... wow I didn't see THAT coming.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Kaji Blaze
2007-02-06 . chapter 1
Got a little bit if "The Fenton Mennace going on there, huh? If you are wondering what I'm talking about, in the aformentioned episode, Young Blood sticks his intangible hand through Jazz's head to anoy Danny, much like Danni did with David to impress the twins.
Dundee
2007-01-16 . chapter 7
Wonderful! You're a great story writer! I can't wait to see more about Danni! These stories make me want to start watching TV again just so I can watch the show! As if I didn't have enough timewasters... There's a couple of weird spellings here and there around the stories, but nothing to detract from the story itself.
Samantha-Girl Scout
2006-12-12 . chapter 7
...seems like you went a tad bit to fast on this chappy... didn't flow from the one before you left me thinking... What in the WORLD is this about? any way... still continue!
Invader Johnny
2006-12-12 . chapter 7
Well whatever this Wine Ghost has to tell Dani, I bet it's worth waiting for.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
dArkliTe-sPirit
2006-12-12 . chapter 7
Wow, the bar ghost knows the Bishop? Interesting. I HAVE to hear his story. :D
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