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Reviews for: Darkness Within
acosta perez jose ramiro
2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Good story. Certainly, Gar and Terra are a very dangerous criminal couple; Slade should actually consider this in the series (or in a Direct to Video Movie), having two apprentices instead of one.

Keep the good writing.
grease
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
wow. this is VERY diffrent from what people usually write... it's interesting. yea it'd be cool to continue.
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