I LOVED IT!

Believe me when i sya that this fiction was Fabulous and very fascinating. Perfect!!
i mean the story fold with humour, angst and utmost beauty!
your description was really marvellous and that lemon was best!! i mean ive been here for three years and ive red almost every yaoi bba fic but such lemons are hard to find! it was AWESOME!

the ending was however not. i praised at the start and believe methat should be engraved and advertised for the fiction. it was fantastic!! but you could have done alot more better at the end.
i read this fiction three week s or so ago so i dont remember very solid details but i do remember tht the end disapointed me somehow n it couldve cum as better. a hell lot better if you ask me!

there were some grammatical mistakes but the plot and the story and the romance was beatuifully fit. i seriously loved your story. its right down hard to get some good stuff to read these days.
im though a bit disappointed that u have no other bba story. do think of writing on pleas.e n make it even more angst.

on a side fangirl note; OMG Kai was adorable n soo sexy n kool! -gushes-

ahem, sorry about that but i couldnt help mentioning it. the story was unbelievably beautiful but the end really is a turn off compare to the initial chapters so try to re edit it.
n oh yeh, Tala was given quite a perfect persona. Kai was kinda same but Tala literally was given a wonderful personality. it fitted quite rightly n there did not seem too much OOC-ness either. you made him vulnerable, witty, frisky and lovable too!! just adorable!!

else than tht, else than that...hmm...i guess you could have really make that Tala dieing scene better n put some more angst scenes while suring boris meetings with them. n definitely the end should have been better. how many times have i said tht now??

okay now ill be off as ive babbled quite alot. good job miss bohemian. hey what does that mean, care to explain plz?
wish u luk n best wishes.
urs,
Neena

very nice yayyaya for you!
But you know what would have been the super uber awesome lovely ness, if you ended it in a gallery with kai's art, and the main piece being a drawing of Tala...

but of course I've got Tala on the brain, you ending was also the awesomness!

I was about to storm off screaming Ï HATE YOU but then of course Tala woke up...so another good chapter.
X

very cool, but i can feel the suspense building...so i should go see where that leads!

that was great, that was super awesome.
that was UBERsomeLYawesomeneSS!
kai and Tala are like heaven in a fanfic...*sighs dreamily*

i like the way you made the first hint drop in...drunk Tala...feeling emotional...and horny! *grins* teenagers! lol.

on to the next!!

nice nice,
Tala's hyper for a possible casualty, but as loveable as ever.

on to the next chapter!

i like it...boris must die!

ah! i'm still enjoying it!!
AH! Poor tala, my baby, i hate it when Boris touches him in any story, kai can take it but not my sweet cherry pop!!
AH! anyway..thats over...on to read the next chappy!

highly pleased, i know i am bacause when I'm happy my nose burns and my eyes tear *_*

Its a really cool story...bye now, more to read!

I must admit, I'm just on this chapter, I'll review each chapter, unless i dislike a chappy!
but i so far like the plot and pace of the story, it isn't to rushed. looking forward to the rest so let me get there!
Lyson

I loved it -sniff-. That pairing (Kai and Tala) is the best...and you pulled it off perfectly. Something I can only be found dreaming of dreaming doing it. I loved this story so much that it's going on my favourites and so are you =) your pretty talented. a cookie for you.

'Member what I said about you restoring my faith? Still -so- there.

Once again I want to hug/bear hug/make out with/glompeth your characters. There's something about the way that you write them that makes them so vivid, like they're about to jump out of the story and do a chicken dance.

...Ok... forget I said that.

But seriously, you nailed the characterisation which is refreshing and wonderful.

I am a little bit confused about the actual plot. As I've said before I'm actually a Balcov fan so seeing him as the ultimate evil was highly amusing. As much beautiful characterisation you put into Tala and Kai I felt he was a little bit... flat. Scarily intelligent, yes. Wonderfully evil, of course. But you didn't really explain why.

Because of that I'm still confused as to why Balcov had such a scary thing for only Tala and Kai- considering that Mr D doesn't mention anyone else in the ownage club.

Also there's the whole ownage business. I never got how Tala and Kai could sign away their lives. It's not possible to do that in a legal document because that would really count as slavery, no? And slavery=badbad.

So I understand how Kai got trapped in the clutches of Boris because of le blackmail but Tala's entrapment is... I don't have the words. It doesn't really make sense to me.

That aside, thank you.

Thank you.

Thank you.

Have I said it enough yet?

Thank you.

You restored my faith in the Beyfandom. For that I am ever appreciative.

Thank you

~Panda

*falls down on the ground*

You have restored my faith.

I am not joking. I was about to give up on the Beyblades fandom in general. You've changed my opinion radically. I'm in awe of you.

I WISH I could keep on reading but it's about 2 in the morning and I need to be alive tomorrow. It helps that I'm putting this fic down after and amazingly breathtaking lemon, though.

Have I mentioned that you're awesome yet? No? You're Awesome.

I Have no words for how amazing the characterisation has been so far. The characters you right seem so scary real- in a good way scary real, though.

I'm a bit iffy on the casting of Balcov as the ultimate evil though. But then again I happen to like Balcov. He makes me giggle.

I just... wow. I wish I could keep reading tonight.

Thank you.

~Panda