This was too funny. I could see the action in my head from start to finish, and all the characters were true from start to finish. (and, love the inside joke too). Keep up the good work.
LOL, I started laughing early on, and laughed throughout. I'd add more, but I don't like spoilers... but you built the "drama" going on between Bill and trick-or-treaters wonderfully! As for "THE END?", I hope not! More Josie!