nice ending. i liked it alot.

oohh.i like it.keep going.

I loved it! will there be more?

Excellent! Keep up the great work and please write a sequel!

Loved how you tied the first and last chapters together. But the small cliffhanger at the end was mean. I'm ready for more! This was a great story! Thanks for sharing! :) -LadyCallie

Are you sure this is the end? It sounds more like the beginning of a sequel to me. It would have been nice if you had killed Renfro off, but I guess you can't have everything. Besides, without good villains, these stories wouldn't be nearly as interesting.

wow that was long and really good...max needs to do somethin bout that y lil implant chillin in her neck! great job, this fic was awesome

::holds breath, knowning that trouble is still ahead:: Awesome part. Though I wisj Krit would have just killed Renfro. -LC

man, the shoulda dropped a smackdown on renfro...like bang bang bye bye? lol..it was still really good, keep goin!

That was an amazing chapter. I can't wait for another one to come up. Keep up the good work.

Nice action scene. Will Max be alright. Hurry up and tell us.

I love it! Just one questioin: What about Bling?

OMG, I am soooo impressed! This is an AWESOME story...please hurry with your next section! Great job! :)

Ah...geez, another cliffhanger. At this rate, I'm not going to have any hair left. I commend you for really knowing how to build up the suspence. More...pleeeeeze!

are you really trying to torture me.i gotta know whta happens