 MagykTales 2008-03-24 . chapter 1That was so cute! Insanely adorable. Usually, Yugi/Anzu is far away from my liking, but when you're in the mood...go for it, ne? Anyways, back to the review. I think that you portrayed the characters very well, and thankfully they weren't OOC, in any way, shape or form. Anzu's thought's and feelings on Yami were...to be expected, you could say. The outcome was interesting, as she says that she'll never be able to care as deeply for Yami, without Yugi. Now, in my mind this fact contradicts. Does this mean, that if it were only Yami, she wouldn't be able to love him...at all? Or does she just like Yugi, and Yami was perhaps an infatuation? Or...well, she would love them both, but not one without the other?
Anyways, the grammar was good and mistakes minimum. Something else that cought my attention was that not any of her friends were usually present to see her performances. Well...that's life. Busy, busy. But then tht doesn't mean that they did it on purpose. Humans always jump to conclusions...*sigh*. Well, I think I'm done with my ranting now. Very nice story. One for the C2. Bye! |
 Ashari 2008-03-18 . chapter 1Homigawd that was unbearably adorable. YUUGI is unbearably adorable. Yuugi and Anzu together even more so unbearably adorable. *melts from the sheer cuteness* XD I've always been fascinated by the love triangle between Yuugi, Anzu, and Yami...but I've never considered how the events of the Doma arc might have changed Anzu's view of the Pharaoh...hrm...You've given me some food for thought. I thanks you. *bow* XD |
 BabyBeaver 2007-04-12 . chapter 1That was good. I liked it quite a bit. (Of course, I like Peachshipping, so it figures, right?) ^-^ |
 Michiko Yokisama 2007-04-05 . chapter 1Aw! I actually said that out loud when I finished reading this! It's so cute!
Honestly, I'm not that into Yu-Gi-Oh, so I don't know too much about the pairings and stuff, but I still enjoyed this! |
 Kat 2006-12-04 . chapter 1 Admittedly, I don't know much about Yu-Gi-Oh, it's my younger (18 year old) sister's favorite though, so I've watched some. Your fic is quite good. I wouldn't call this butchering the pairing at all. The pairing was unexpected (by me), for sure, but well done I think, considering what I know of the characters. Now to go run it by the true fan... :) Good work. |
 PARCD 2006-12-04 . chapter 1Do people like to butcher animes and pairings, or is it popular so everyone's doing it these days? Either way, it's pathetic. Has anyone ever told you that your writing reminds me of vomit? The only person that doesn't mind it is the person who threw it up. Everyone else either can't stand it or pretends to.
People don't really like your writing, they pity you. You're writing this garbage and people are eating it up because they don't want to hurt your fucking feelings. Well, I don't care if I do. So, the truth is... you suck!
You suck at writing and you probably suck at life. |
 888888888888888888888888 2006-11-11 . chapter 1This is a a gorgeous Peachshipping oneshot. I have never seen it done so well before, and your writing takes the cake.
Excellent! |
 Sour Schuyler 2006-10-18 . chapter 1VERY VERY awesome. ^_^ I love this pairing, and I love the way you did this fic. |
 Vannessa Hillstead 2006-10-08 . chapter 1Ah...cute. |
 darkphoenixsoul 2006-10-03 . chapter 1That was pretty cute. |
 dbzgtfan2004 2006-10-02 . chapter 1This is a cute story. Please make some more. Yuugi and Anzu forever. |
 Cheeky-eyes 2006-10-02 . chapter 1Aw, sweet! ^_^ I liked it! Cya. |
 Misura 2006-10-02 . chapter 1Peachshipping at its best; sweet, with a hint of sour and something very solid in the middle. I especially enjoyed the part where Anzu compared Yugi and Yami, although of course the ending was what really made me go aw. ;) |
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