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Prozak
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseI honestly want to thank you for writing this story. I've had in mind for the longest time to write something like this, a guilty pleasure that I never could commit myself to. Somewhere in my great OTP love for ShizNat this story satisfies me beyond all else. Is that bad? This story seems so cheesy when I think of other pairings, but for some reason I love it so much. I think I might just cry ;_;.

Okay, so maybe I'm going overboard, but I really do like this story. I'm so biased I can't review properly.
hazumu-kun
2008-02-27
ch 8,
abusehello?Anyone here?Um...it's quite a while now.So why don't you continue this great fanfic.Please update soon or I'll die for waiting "_"
deatheater2493
2008-02-02
ch 8,
abuseyo. what happen next?
gunsnroses123
2007-10-05
ch 8,
abuseGreat story, please update soon, im dying to know what happens!!
chill19
2007-07-29
ch 8,
abusei really love the story and i think its one of the best stories that i have ever read so far. the previous chapters were really angsty though and it made me hate nao :( but great work on writing how they feel and i just love how you connect one chapter to another with smooth transition. the theme park reminded me of "enchanted Kingdom" hehehee (a theme park here in my country) enough of my rambling... update soon ok?
chill19
2007-07-29
ch 5,
abusegawd! i'm so hatin Nao right now! gr! it was perfect until she spoke!
chill19
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseits nao-chan! bravo for mz kitty kat coz u have greatly portrayed into writing what Natsuki was feeling. the pain and anguish that she felt.as i was reading, i was absorbing and feeling what the character felt at the time. nicely done! :D write more ne? onegai!!
makingtea
2007-07-20
ch 8,
abuseJust started reading this and gotta say it's a great story!

It certainly has unexpectedly veered into the comical after the heavy drama in the beginning, but I'm still really enjoying it!

If you asked me before I read this whether someone can make a Nao/Shizuru fic believable, I'd say no. But your story early on regarding how Nao warms up to Shizuru really impressed me. The scene of them talking to Nao's unconscious mom in the hospital was really touching. It even -almost- made me root for them as a couple for an itsy bitsy second... which is no small feat considering I'm all about the SHIZNAT.

I'm not sure how you're going to resolve the triangle, but I do wish Nao doesn't get hurt too badly when ** returns to Nat (wink wink nudge nudge) and that Nao will still find a measure of happiness even when ShizNat gets back together...

Can't wait for more!
AshwolfX
2007-07-19
ch 7,
abuseO fish-sticks. I meant to say 'HAVEN'T' given up on the story. *sheepish look* That's what happens when you don't read thru' what you type.. OTL
AshwolfX
2007-07-19
ch 8,
abuseAw... I kinda feel bad for Nao & Natsuki. Things are already tough enough with them having to compete against each other. Now Reito and Mikoto have gotta make things more difficult. ^^|
So happy that you have given up on the series. I'm keeping my fingers and toes crossed for chapter 9. ^__^
Darkfumae
2007-07-19
ch 8,
abuseI ♥! I ♥!
I love it!
So much jelousy!
I was so happy that I found this story^^
*dances around the room with laptop in arms*
ShizNat all the way!
Please continue with the great stories.
I shall wait at my desk and twiddle my fingers till the next magnificent chapter comes out XD
Very well written, although I do stumble upon the occational grammer mistake/ spelling mistake but...whatever. It's ALL good~
shiznats
2007-07-18
ch 8,
abuseyey...another good chap...hurray...Arigatto...Mz-Kitty-Kat-san...T_T
gale
2007-07-18
ch 8, anon.
abusewow!! tha was alittle great!!
Shiznat
2007-07-18
ch 8,
abuseyeah i love dates at the amusement park but i want more shiznat interaction =)
Sugador
2007-07-18
ch 8, anon.
abuseI just found this fanfic and I'm so curious.
Love the way Nao and Natsuki are battling over Shizuru. And I'm actually quite curious about Reito as well!
Please don't make us wait too long!
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