Gebbu...

I wish I could like, appear there... =_= I wish I was Mikoto. Except I'd probably take a gun from no where and shoot the guy by accident. xD

Thought I don't think my aim would be able to hit him. LOL.

REAREAFEGEWRARARAWRCOWSRAWR!
Pf... Nao... =_= go away. xD

Well, please update soon!

-Akira
Thx~

I'm loving this the dazziling swan boat ride, the haunted house the heartbraking mirror house, this story is well very emotional for Nao and Natsuki, but I feel Shizuru is leading both comperiters on which I find a bit Bi.tchy of her to be honest, but please update soonx

-gasp- I had to read this story over from the beginning since I forgot what happened. Oh and first time reviewing for this story, but I'm still loving it.

Natsuki is being so careful with her actions, it's a nice feeling to see that. Loved how Shizuru is thinking of Natsuki so deeply for her even she not there... the house of mirrors I had a tear coming, poor Natsuki.
Anyways, I will be looking forward to the next update.

I haven't seen this story for a long time and I'm glad I have a chance to read the next chapter.
I doubt Nao's feeling for Shizuru is love. Reading just this chapter remind if off the ever so amazing story "If There Be Thorns"...the part where Nao confessed to Shizuru. I just think that because Shizuru has become so close to Nao that the love she feels toward Shizuru is simply a sisterly love type. Nao is afterall, a lonely teen who has/had been seeking love and wanted to be loved and cared for. She might have conclude that what she feel for Shizuru at the moment is romantic love when it should have been the latter. I have a feeling that Shizuru will probably be thinking the same and judging from the way this story is coming along I think it is clear to me that what Shizuru feel for Nao is nothing more than a sister love.

I like how Natsuki is becoming so aware of Shizuru and starting to realizes the golden rule of: 'you never know what's important' until she is out of reach.
I like how Natsuki is trying to prove her worth when Shizuru is also doing the same thing. I like how she react strongly against Reito when she see that he was too close to *coughs* her Shizuru :D
Lastly, I like the end, where Shizuru lend toward Natsuki...it makes me feel good. Afterall, Shizuru is always thinking about Natsuki and I think this is enough for hopes

I'm sorry but Nao is just too desperate
It almost seems as if she is trying to win Shizuru over because of Natsuki. Natsuki and Nao may has similar qualities but their personal life are very different. Nao still has her mother and will continue to recieve a motherly love. Natsuki doesn't have anyone if she does not depend on her friend - We all know she only has a few. I think what Nao has at the moment (her mother) is everything that Natsuki will be envy off. What Natsuki need now is Shizuru :D
Again, I question Nao's love for Shizuru...no matter where you might plan to take this
I just don't see how Nao's love will be the romantic type
Anyways, Shizuru will probably know it best and hopefully whatever the respond is will not destory the good feeling we have at the moment...I just think that Nao should understand that Natsuki need Shizuru more than her. Well, we are talking about Nao and I never know if she does or not or if she only do thing because of self-interest.

I don't want to go farther so I'll end here. See you soon!

Eh, I don't know if I can read this.

Oh bother, I probably will. It's just hard watching my Natsuki go through such a hard time.

:S

I'm really diggin the story! I get those tingling feelings in my stomach when I read this. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Ah you are back!! I am so happy, I had missed this story! I love all the girls here, you've put me in a very difficult situation!! I dont know who to root for! They are all adorable, damn...
Either way, this is excellent. Keep up the good work.
RPX

It’s a nice story :D and is likely to happen. Reito is really romantic and undestanding, Mikoto has still an endless abyss inside her stomach and clingy to soft things… hehe, Nao is ever bold but a lot better (I like her), Shizuru is as wonderful as ever and Natsuki is desperately trying to get Shizuru back (she’s the same as Nao, both of them tried to be ** outside but vulnerable and soft on the inside)… sigh .The truth is in my opinion, I actually want this fanfic to end just as a NATXSHIZXNAO… is it even possible? (No offence to the SHIXNAT/SHIZNAO lovers). Its just that if Shizuru would turn to Nao, Natsuki would definitely be sad and turn back to her old self, only that she still have friends to support her. On the other hand, if she picks Natsuki, it would be devastating to Nao since she had grown fond to Shizuru and the one she really cared for at the same time cared for her too. It’s just too confussing… can’t Shizuru have both of them? 

i really love this story!! i wish i had found it sooner... your writing style is absolutely stunning, and i love the way you portray the characters! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!! your story to me is like food to mikoto!! ;)

this is one amazing fic n i luuv it~ is shizuru gonna end up picking natsuki or nao i wonder? gosh wondering who'll have shizuru's heart (cmon natsukii!!) is driving me crazy cuz nao is fond of her too xP

omg yay update!
i like the closing idea you have there for natsuki going to starttaking things slowly to win shizuru, and reito's moment with shizuru was intense!!
looking forward to seeing how you bring the next few things about, i feel bad about the heartbreak, but its necessary fro your story!!

Wow. How long has it been since you last updated?
Well, I'm just glad that you still rem'ber about the story. I have missed it greatly.
Doesn't it seems like a race btw Natsuki and Nao? However, it seems that Natsuki knows her limit...afraid that her aggressive action may push Shizuru away, thus chooses her word wisely. It's interesting to learn that about her. After all, they say patience is virtue.
by the way, it's a good reading into Shizuru and Reito earlier relationship and the contrast btw them.

Your last paragraph there kind worry me. Natsuki is working as hard as she can to win Shizuru back, Shizuru is still thinking about Natsuki but afraid she'll push the girl away if she cross her line, and Natsuki seems to try so hard to get Shizuru to notice her in ways she hope Shizuru did with Natsuki. I just think that Shizuru's relationship with Natsuki and Nao are two different level, a romance love and a friendship love.
I just think that the more Nao pursue the great hurt she will receive at the end.

It makes me feel happy that Shizuru is still always thinking about Natsuki. I hope Shizuru and Natsuki would get their time alone before the end of the day. However, it will be hard to be alone without Nao tagging alone. I feel that Nao is feeling insecure. She feels that if Shizuru spend time with Natsuki than she'll lose Shizuru and lose to Natsuki. Somehow, I have a feeling that Nao is attractive to Shizuru because Shizuru has been ever so kind to her and Shizuru actually mind about Nao's business. I feel Nao might mistake Shizuru's kindess for sometime else. I think that once Shizuru know about Nao's feeling, she will have to set distance btw them because she does not want to hurt Nao, for both of their sakes. I know she does not want to hurt Natsuki too!

I'm looking forward to your next update, ne :D

omg! red all the chapters just now when i found this story and I've got to say... its AWESOMELY GREAT! fufu.
i just hope it won't get too sad! Its already pulling at my heartstrings and now I rely want shizuru/natsuki to be together!
I rely must say, this chapter was great and the ending was well done, although it made me sad, (but in a good way if you get wat I mean XD).
:) Overall i rely rely like this story!
The scenes, conversations and settings are great! I'm looking forward to shiznat moments in the future! And I'm hoping everyone gets a happy ending.
Your writing style is rely interestng and I'm rely enjoying the story so far. The competing Natsuki vs Nao is the icing on the cake! Keep up the great work! And update as soon as u can! Hope this review was like tea, mayo and cellphones! :)

KFC Lol. Please don't turn this into a Natsuki/Shizuru/Nao relationship thing. Ew. Natsuki/Shizuru forever!

I honestly want to thank you for writing this story. I've had in mind for the longest time to write something like this, a guilty pleasure that I never could commit myself to. Somewhere in my great OTP love for ShizNat this story satisfies me beyond all else. Is that bad? This story seems so cheesy when I think of other pairings, but for some reason I love it so much. I think I might just cry ;_;.

Okay, so maybe I'm going overboard, but I really do like this story. I'm so biased I can't review properly.