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HopelessRomantic93
2006-12-24
ch 1,
abuseWhy is Vaughn just letting Syd go? And who is this "she" that they are talking about? I'm guessing that Vaughn had an affair? Update soon please, I can't be left here hanging with all these questions running through my head!
lkatetoe
2006-10-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseTotally awesome!! Okay I have to admit I was lost through all of it but dont take offence because I have the mental compacity of a 2 year old lol seriously great
agent belle
2006-10-02
ch 1,
abusethis is a good beginning, could you please continue it soon?
love belle
Muddy Poodle
2006-10-02
ch 1,
abuseSo usually what I do when reading new stories is just click on the link and see if it's worth reading (I'm kinda on the run right now) and when I read the first chapter, I was hooked. Are we talking Sydney and Vaughn here? What a great way to describe the setting! (Although the thought of sweat/watermelon scented hair wasn't very appealing to me...lol but whatever works for her!) Great first chapter and happy writing!
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