Wow. I..love..this! It'd make a terrific series. It sounds so romantic and sad. I wonder what happened to her?

wow this is really good!

Great writing. I'd love to see a series on the subject, if you wanted to do one. Well done!

Hm... I wonder why this is so familar.. xD

Excellant writing..

This was really good. I wonder what the Pharaoh did to his love?