*Giggle*

wonderful story. i loved the last line. Riza can be so dedicated to her work can't she? i can just imagine her dressed like in this fic and Roy just STARING at her. hee hee!

Ja Ne! :D :)

Moonlight Star Phoenix

Way to go, Riza. That was priceless, that last comment.

It was so well done! I liked it. She's a modest woman, but she will go above and beyond and if it means dancing about scantily clad, then so be it. It suited her. Well done.

That was just brilliant. I had pretty much figured out that the dancer was Riza, so I was wondering what they would say to each other after they made their escape, and you did no disappoint. She seemed rather confident that she could distract them all, no? _ And of course, I loved the line at the end, but I’m sure you already know that was pure gold.

I also liked the image of Roy being “a little fat around the edges” and his distress about her hair color. What a great thing to think about when one is running for dear life :) But that just made it sweeter.

So yeah, I wanted to play Prince of Persia games after reading this. I hope you're happy.

This was a fun read, even though it's hard to imagine Riza dancing in such a sexy manner. I think she WAS dancing for Roy. I love how he was so entranced by her movements while she performed.

Sucks to be the Emperor. This fic reminds me of a scene one might find in a James Bond movie. Very engaging story, and unique too.

Thanks for sharing!

Nil: Yay for inlusing Xing! but it sucks that Ling's Daddy got killed. *sigh* I loved the last line! It made me happy. Xingese forever! mehehe...

*giggles* Oh yes, Riza wouldn't do that unless it completely necessary.

And Roy isn't compltely necessary. *falls over laughing*

Somehow, I knew that was Riza dancing. No wonder Roy's eyes were transfixed upon her. He couldn't get destracted by anything prettier, really. Great work on speading the Royai, by the way! My favourite part was the last line 'You’re just jealous that I don’t do that sort of thing for you.' Haha, Riza is really good at come backs. Keep writing and spreading the Royai around the place. The world needs it. ;D

This was so good. Amazing discriptions, and I loved the last line. It's incredible, you've graduated and you're still writing away while everyone's partying. Don't forget to have fun *coughrizacough* ;)You never fail to bring us great entertainment.

hey, that was pretty good.

but i still don't know who's going to be the next pride.

'please, keep writing!'