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| Ratdogtwo 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT GREAT JOB |
| aimeeish 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Gawd. This is so adorable! I swear this fic could perfectly describe to why I love the Emma and Scott relationship so much. I mean, they're just *meant* for each other. Very nice, and I love your writing style. Quite amazing if you ask me. |
| Ivy3 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseI loved their banter and their complicated relationship. |
| GrimReaper'sVampireMistress 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very good story!! I'm not a big fan of Scott's (much too boyscoutish for me, I'm a Remy fan myself), but this story was a lot of fun to read, and it was very good. I loved reading it, and I will definitely recommend it to anyone. Bravissimo! |
| Darlin 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseAn enjoyable piece. Lately I’ve really been intrigued by this couple. I don’t really care for them, I think Scott will always love Jean first and foremost, but it’s interesting to see different people’s takes on this odd couple. There was one part when they were discussing her giving him permission to say the name Jean and Scott says she got mad when he did but he actually didn’t – thought you might want to know that. Overall, a good story with a very telling ending – quite good in fact – it says so much about what they are as a couple. I have to add that Blonde Misfortune by the Bud is a hilarious read, another take on Emma and somewhat Scott, something that might interest you and other fans of this pair. |
| anonymous 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've said it before and I'll say it again, most stories that deal with these characters suck because they either worship the JOTT and demonize the EMOTT or vice versa and its not right, i like your characterization, your way with dialog, I like your work, Progression is a great story too, but if you start Jean bashing I'm gonna... |
| Rogue14 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseLol, that was really entertaining ^_^ Good job! |
| The Bud 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'd have offered her to the truck driver and danced off merrily. |
| SM 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that was really good. I always find the dynamic between Emma and Scott to be quite good, especially when things like ethical telepathy and normal are thrown into the mix. |
| kiragecko 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI love any story that gives Emma a chance. This is a great little character piece. kiragecko |
| - J 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseA very good fic about a very confusing love. It seems dead-on character. I love how she brought up that they haven't even addressed her issues yet. I love that idea, beyond the subtext of her upcoming actions. I'd love to read another, but if not, thank you. |
| LithiumAddict 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's difficult to find decent Astonishing fics. Of course, that could be because I'm not looking in the right corners of this pit. Thank goodness I found this - I was beginning to lose hope. I enjoyed this piee with my coffee, which was probably a bad idea considering how much of it nearly ended up on my keyboard. Good freaking grief. I simply adore your Emma. ADORE, dammit. You had me right from the "...we mortals may speak it without divine retribution" line. She's snarky, she's sarcastic, and merciful heavens, the FORESHADOWING! This is the point whre I end this review, as I am currently lacking anything intelligent to say. It's also the point where I go see if you've written any more Astonishing fics, as you've ignited a rather strong craving for them. Well done. |