I am crying this was amazing usually I don't read munchs pov but this was amazing I actually feel what Olivia must be feeling. Great job

mariskaandchris

I dunno if this is good thing or a bad thing ( I think it's good) but you finally made me cry. Seriously I have a gaint lump in my throat and I wanna cry. It's very easy to make me sad, but not to make me cry. That was a very powerful piece of writing, no kidding. Amazing. I feel so bad...it sucks so bad for Liv and Elliot. I love the emotion, so painful. The tone was perfect throughout the entire thing, no wishy-washy feeling came off of it. And damn, I never realized how strong Olivia and Elliot were together, but now that I think about it...

So-good-it-made-me-(basically)-cry. :'(

:( You honestly made me cry a little here! I can't wait to see what happens later..I hope El keeps his promise.

ha! Knew you'd get it together. Loved this. :D

Poor munch he has to go through so much. Goodbyes suck. :'(

You have a knack of saying so much in so little words. Well, you have me hooked for more. I can't wait to see how this develops.

Keep it up.

hmm...why do I see Munch/Alex or Munch/Liv in this? Hope you figure it out. :D

But this was great.

wow, great opener!