And life went on in rwu too lol. Okay, I'll admit, probably 95% of the jokes in here went over my head since I didn't know the names of the characters but... I still thought the parts that I did know and even a few that I didn't were pretty funny. So great job in the humor department!
However, there were a couple of parts that seemed to lack transitions. For example, one minute you're talking about Yami wanting to learn the game Go and the next were discussing a girl on an uncrowded train.
Overall, great job!

Awesome xD I love how you managed to fit so many different anime into one story and actually give it some semblance of a plot that doesn't involve anime characters getting captured in pokeballs.

Very, very entertaining to read; I wish there'd been more to read X3

Oh man...your creativity is awe-inspiring. The Kagato/Ilpalazzo connection is just...genius. They really do look an awful lot alike. I also really like how you've played around with history to make it fit in with the various anime canons. Great chapter.

Mwahaha! I love this. It's witty rather than slapstick, and you make quite a bit of poignant commentary onboth the anime and fanfiction communities. I think my favourite part so far was definitely Ilpalazzo's noble speech-- because those poor, bashed souls certainly need somebody who will fight for them. I also loved the bit about the various potentially cataclysmic events 19 in the first chapter. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more. It's not very often that a parody is done so tastefully.

I found that more amusing than I should have. XD Some very good lines there. Totally ridiculous crack, but it's clear you actually have a sense of humour, so somehow you pulled it off. Good job.

Each time I read this, I am reminded that you are one fuckin cool commie.

O...M...G too much crack anime, you must spend your life watching it...the brain boggles

this is great. i love it. unfortunatley not familiar with all the animes being mentioned but I still know enough ofthem to enjoythe story. More chapters please.