As you mentioned, the flow does not exactly fit all the time. However, it was quite enjoyable to read this. It was humorous and brought me back to my childhood. While you might not own the game Lemmings, you could always try to take the animals. :P

Heh, pretty good. Lemmings has been one my favorite video games for the past 15 years, so I got a good chuckle out of it.

It's funny because it's true. lol

Lmao really funny I'm erading it now evn tho u put it on nearly 2 and half years ago.

Used 2 luv playin lemmings n dis chant made me smile :)

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Nice poem/chant! Keep it up!

Oy! Some words were crude, but seriously, this one made me smile! I don't smile.

wow, i can leave a review on my on story...

THIS IS BRILLIANT! I LOVE IT! WELL DONE, I SHALL GIVE YOU LOTS OF MONEY!

-reli, im no tthat selfish ;-)

lol that's funny