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Dancing Nightmare
2007-11-11 . chapter 6
Forgot to send this in the review for chapter 8, and I didn't want to be with the contest entries :P Or something. So here's my OC, (ab)use her if you want to ^^

Name: Felice.

Age: 18

Hair Color: Blonde.

Style: Long bangs, the rest goes to the mid of her back.

Eye Color: Grey and brown (marbled)... They're slant-ish.

Height: 5' 5"

Build: Er... Normal?

Clothing: Game Clothing: Let's see... *makes things up at the spot* A dark grey, sleeveless robe with all these zippers all over da place; black-and-white fingerless gloves that goes to the elbow; a sleeveless white top with a turtle neck; black jeans that ends right below the knees; a wide belt that's made of wires; a sash to hold her swords; black shoes with a three-centimetres wedge heel (What? I never said her choice of clothing was smart) And a red-and-white baseball cap :D

Personality: Felice is a master at manipulating people, and likes to mess with peoples minds. Regardless what you may think, Felice is not a nice person. I'll be worried if you think she is. Her number one, two and three priorities are herself. She never trusts people (Not because of some sad yada yada stuff, but she knows that she, herself, is tricking people and so is aware of that people may do the same to her), least of all trusting people on telling the truth.

Side: Baddie powah :D

Weapon: Two shiny swords that she wears in a sash at her right hip :D They like shorter katanas (Yeah yeah, she's not Japanese, so SUE ME) with black blades.

Extra: She has this freakishly annoying, shrill laugh ("Ma-hahahaha~")... And Felice is quite fond of owls, for some reason or another.

History: She grew up in this rich family who had this huge mansion and whatnot. Her crap parents didn't really care for her, so she was left being raised by her crazed psycho maid (Who hated Felice's parents, btw) and partly herself. So she got her own effed up vision of the world and what was right and wrong. Wohoo... And being raised by a psycho maid with a serious need of going to anger management who hates your parents left their pretty trails. Then the maid made Felice to (wait for it...) kill her own parents! (le GASP! Turning point~!) And she was, like, banished or something. I dunno. Well, she's ebil gerbil.
Dancing Nightmare
2007-11-11 . chapter 8
I understand completely (HI I'm a new "watcher" btw :D), don't be sad. I hate it when I loose my glasses, because even if I would stand right next to them, I wouldn't be able to see them because of my crappy vision. So I make my friends and family to help me. Look under your bed! And in drawers, under the pillow, behind the couch, and so on... If you have really bad luck they may be left in school somewhere (The chance is bigger if you only use them to read with) or something. But if they were brand new, aren't there some sort of guarantee?

I hope it'll work out well for you, and I'm working on an OC that you could use if you like. I may PM some ideas to you ;)
Shanna W.I.
2007-03-18 . chapter 8
Hey, hey... don't stress yourself out. If you've got a lot going on, I (and I hope the other readers) completely understand. Take as long as you need. I hope things get better for you :)
ThunderBenderPrincess
2007-03-17 . chapter 8
Poor Koki.

If nobodies, like organization 13, were able to control the whispers, they may find their own whispers, and if they have their soul, they would have an entire memory of their lives before becoming nobodies!

Maybe when a whisper finds its nobody, it forms a grayish version of its proper nobody.

Because whispers are so powerful, the whisper over lord(or whatever he/she is) wants to destroy all nobodies!

The reason Orgy thirteen wants Gexamn is because she is the only Nobody who is a mediator(At least I think)

I'll try to come up with some stuff, but I don't want to be a burden. Update when you feel like it!
CheshireMax
2007-03-17 . chapter 8
wow that sucks for you. i feel for you, i'll send you my entry again. good luck!

-CheshireMax
Nibiru's Starshine
2007-03-17 . chapter 8
I know how you feel. You can pull through it. I have faith. Don't worry and keep on Truckin. I will miss you!

~Arie Under Presure
crystalfeathers
2007-03-17 . chapter 8
Sorry that you're going through so much. :(

I'll be waiting for your return, I'm happy to wait, because it's better to wait then the authoress to force words out of herself.

I really hope things clear up for you. ^_^

-Crystalfeathers
Nameless Dragon
2007-03-17 . chapter 8
Dont worry about not updating for a while but thanks for letting us know about the story and such. I know the feeling, I havent updated anything with months and havent left a AN or anything but meh...Coursework is a pain...but dont worry and I look foward to when you come back to this story =)
silver moon droplet
2007-03-05 . chapter 7
OH SNAPPLE IMA LATE...
but you haven't updated so i win.


a fight between the goodies and the baddies is loved. or one of the baddies going to do something on their own by themselves when they weren't suppose to.

ROMANCE please and thank you :P

maybe a little more OC shinning...
thats all for now!~
Hawkblade
2007-02-07 . chapter 7
Well now, I wanna see the emperor or empress(could be female) Whisper and Sephiroth! You have to have Sephiroth! (starts humming One-Winged Angel).
Shanna W.I.
2007-02-06 . chapter 7
March 1?! Hot damn, that gives me enough time! :)
Nameless Dragon
2007-02-06 . chapter 7
Ah school always getting in the way , its the same for me so I know how you feel, (coursework sucks!) but this is a good story and if people want to read it they should be willing to wait, but thats just my opion.

As for the idea thing well, what if the whisper thing got so out of control there were too many to hold off at one pointand Sora or some of the OC's hold them off so that the rest of the group/s can get away. Would be cool to see someone else apart from Sora take on legions of enemies on his own but hey my idea is one of many and its probably used already. (yes i still have bad grammarr/spelling sorry)
Leah S.M.K.O.F---whatever
2007-02-05 . chapter 7
hey it's leah.
can i use that one idea the fight as my entry.
note ana's d.a
i'll be there.
crystalfeathers
2007-02-05 . chapter 7
I wish you luck in your schooling. I too, can be a profesional procrasinator. -_-'

Unfortunately, I can't really think of any ideas, other than meeting Kairi's and Sora's whispers. :)

I actually am one of the few people who don't have an OC in this story. ^^'

Like I said in one of my reviews, I figure you had enough OC's to deal with, but if you did want another character to let me know. You never did, so I assumed my assumption was accurate. :)

Good luck in the real world!
ThunderBenderPrincess
2007-02-05 . chapter 7
I got an idea!

If nobodies, like organization 13, were able to control the whispers, they may find their own whispers, and if they have their soul, they would have an entire memory of their lives before becoming nobodies!

Maybe when a whisper finds its nobody, it forms a grayish version of its proper nobody.

Because whispers are so powerful, the whisper over lord(or whatever he/she is) wants to destroy all nobodies!

Hope this is good! Update soon!
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