Well for starters why is Katara's lips swollen? will i find this out if you post the rest of the story? i'm not much of a grammer natzi, so i can't help you too much there but otherwise the story has a fairly good opening, and i would be intrested in reading more.

Omg! write more i'd pay. girl ur lucky 2 have an imagination like that! Write more

Sorry, but really bad. You didn't explain at all why they were on the island, the writing was confusing, and Zuko would have firebended on the bear in really life.

Nice! i am a huge zutara fan and i have read tons of fan ficions and yours is nuber 2 on my list number one is my own. grat job keep writing especially about the one where katara commits suicide it was really intresting but it stopped.*puppy dg face with small tear* email me back! have fun writing i can tell you adore it!1

This is so funny! I love it. It's smart how the bear is the spirit bear

How DARE you say that...that G-word! You offend me greatly!

...just kidding. XD That was brilliant, sweets. It made me giggle. I hope the bear likes his new wife.

That story was so cool! I loved it!

I dunno what a review is, but this story was so good! I loved it a lot! You should write some more. (is this a review?)

Ok for..get about the silly bear... what happens what hapenswhat happens... WRITE MORE>>PLEASE!! muchas gracias..

great story by the way..what exactly do the spirits want?

What are you talking about? How Katara misses Zuko?? m idk

i love it. what iwas gonna say is that i no dat zuko and katara kissed

LOVE IT! And you'd better get the next chapter up, ZP, or else! LOL JK! Can't wait til you post more. I always got your back girl!

Take your time, I'm sure your story will be great once you get over writer's block.

Lol I just have to know more! :D

where was your main thought as to where this story was going? let me know that and i'll come up with some suggestions! :]]