Good. The image of logan as a action hero type is kinda weird though. Creative, funny dialogue. Like how you included everyone from the series.

WOW, what an absolutely brillant fic. I stumbled across it by accident and I am so glad that I did. I loved the way that you brought in so many of Season One's underused characters and the way that you intertwined them together - awesome. I also liked the fact that you wrote this as a script, it just made it seem so much more real that way. I have to say that once I started reading this I couldn't stop. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more of what you have written.

A very emotional and powerful ending. I loved it. I'm glad you didn't really have them bang each other right off. You portrayed everyone in this story excellently. Please continue to write fics. You do such a great job of it. :)

Fantastico! You had emotion and advancement. Great job

Oh man, that was fantastic. Glad to see this is still going. :)

I've really enjoyed this story. You do a good job of being true to the characters. I especially like the way you portrayed Logan as strong despite the pain of losing Max, I think that is the way he would be. Some of the connections seem kind of far-fetched to me (Father Destry et al.) but you do a good job of making them believable. Is there more coming? I wanna know how the story ends! Keep writing... :)

Keep writing...I keep checking to see if there's a new chapter out yet, but no... I don't know where you are or what you're doing but it can't be more important than finishing this fic (more important to me anyway. I don't care if you're on vacation or your computer broke or whatever and can't finish it right now, I wanna see some new chapters). There's so many new fics out now and yours is one of the few that has kept my attention long enough to review again begging you to continue. Come on now...you know you want to.

-BBG

POST MORE SOON! I love this series!

This is good! There's a lot about Logan that the peeps at FOX haven't explained yet, but you do it perfectly. Just a few spelling/grammar mistakes: Act 13 should be "Let the Games Begin", no 's' on the end. Anyway, keep writing!

I really like how this chapter gives a lot of insight into some of the characters, Logan and Lydecker in particular. Looking forward to the last 3 chapters.

The narrative form can be highly over-rated. I like the style that you've employed for this story. It works well. Can't wait for the final acts.

Great Chapter. I can totally see Original Cindy speaking like that. I especially like the Logan and Cindy bond. It's sweet to see.

You captured Logan just right. I like the history between Logan and Father Destry. Nicely written.

Ty the Spy,

Actually, I do subtly talk about it. You'll see. And yes, he does have a secret, but its not because he's Eyes Only. I wont go to it in detail, but you will read references about it through his friends Father Destry/Daisy/Sebastian. A secret isn't a secret if everyone knows & don't worry, it's nothing supernatural or anything like that. Nautica7mk

what's different about him? Are you talking about that he's EO or not? Like he has some deep, dark secret that he tells nobody about? Is that what it is? I mean, you said,in his thoughts, that even max didn't know what he was. I very suspicious, Nautica7mk, i very suspicious. Please go toward this area and...wmm...talk about it at some point. PLEASE! i am so curious, if i could, i'd go through my computer to get to urs. Hmmmmmmm...i wonder...nahh...it wouldn't work. The last time i opened a portal...nevermind. Great chapter. please continue.