it was a great story and i'm sad to see it go! hope to hear another story from you again! :)

I tend not to like HP/LOTR crossovers, but I love this story. Thank you for writing - I love your stories

I dont like Yaoi stories but this story is nice.

The only ? I have for you is, who is left in charge exactly?? It can't be that annitte girl, right? I mean, power corrupts and all and what do you mean by the Laima are finally able to join the organization?? Wasn't it created by one of Harry's descendant, in the first place and isn't Laima above Vampires, since Vampires are turned and Laima are true born vampires??

So, with Harry and Co going back to sleep, who rule and is it a council of Laima, vampire and humans and they are ruled by that aninta girl, which totally defects the whole purpose of the story, if so...


The story is good thou, just the above problem..Also, does Harry have any descendants left?? You never said..

Also, that thing with Aragon's son, well, its a good idea, but NOT all descendants are pure at heart..Look at Harry and Alex's own!! You should've had Harry say somekind of oath that if one of Aragon's own descendant isn't worthy or just evil, then he shouldn't have been given the knowledge or even know of it or it judges him unworthy is broken and no longer will his descendant be able to know of the knowledge or where Harry and co sleeps..Something like that!! That I was disappointed with..Not all MAN is like Aragon..

Lastly, how did Harry and Alex have children..You also never addressed this issure..

I know your story is finished but I just can't help myself for bringing up flaws to this otherwise, good read!1

Sincerely,

Hey again,

This story, I'm impressed so far..

Sincerely,

Its done, one of the most amazing crossovers/OC filled fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Good job!

Well done.

Amazing, simply amazing job. Your writing style captivates the reader and hooks us in, forcing us to read from the beginning to the end. I loved every minute of reading this. Your characters are all believable and urge the reader to fall right in love with them. My only complaint is the spelling errors that are littered throughout the pice, and that take away from the story a little bit more every time they appear. It isn't just spelling differences between the U.K. and the U.S., but also little word misplacements, such as using "form" instead of "from" and other little mistakes like that. I have read and loved other works that you've written, and so know that you can clean up the little errors. Other then these little slip ups, which make all of the difference when reading someone's work, this story is wonderful, and certainly lives up to the standard you have set with your other works. Wonderful story!

I really love this story. Will there be an epilogue that shows times when Middle-Earth is growing and Harry and co. are awaken? It could be fun to see places where they are woken quickly then go back to sleep or something.

oh.. nice! but i don't know who's seme and who's uke.. that's seme-dom and uke-sub, if you didn't know..

the best!
the best hp lotr crossover ever written..
u have the essence of j.k.rowling and j.r.r. tolkien embedded in you..
god bless you for writing such a wonderful fic!!

Um... shouldn't Legolas be just an elfling in this chapter? I seem to recall that's he's just shy of 20 years when LOTR begins?? I also believe that you mention later in this story, that Legolas claims to have met Harry when he was young, but his father had told him all about the vampires...

Cheers!

I absolutely adored it seriously I thought it was brilliant, so will you write a sequel about when they wake up next?
please, please, pretty please with sugar on top
:)

A good story, keep writing.

I loved this. It was brilliant. The fight scenes were well choreographed and I loved all of the characters. *sigh* Loved it all! The idea of making them sleep was new. I loved the descriptions of of their city. It sounds beautiful...
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