hm, i think i prefer kaoru to be the uke, not hikaru. good story

It takes someone with talent to be able to switch the roles, but keep Kaoru in his more submissive state of mind, and likewise for Hikaru's sense of being the driving force. ^-^ Definately a great read!

Nice!
~Kyoko

Ahh~ It's beautifully written stories like this one that make going back to older fics well worth the trouble. I love how you reversed their roles and at the same time kept their characters completely believable. Even if it only depicts sex, there was something more touching to it, like the obvious trust between them to both try something that makes them uncomfortable. Again, beautiful story. It was a lovely read. :)

This is one of the best fics I have read! It's so well written with beautiful characterisation and the sex is just... god.

Wow, that was really good. I hope you write more! :)

...(dies of nosebleed)

surprisingly enough, a unique idea. i've never thought of it, either. i think hikaru was portrayed well, and i didn't recognize any mistakes in spelling or grammar. nice job. ^_^

O_O YOW! *Waves fan at self* VERY well done! It was sweet and sexy; deadly combination. XD I enjoyed reading it. *Adds to favorites and gives cookie* =^.^=

Surprisingly, I like the awkwardness of this piece. It was supposed to be that way, and you did it well. It was a very from both perspectives, and very realistic. Keep up the good work!

cute story

*nosebleed*

THAT WAS SO AWESOME!! You know, this is the first fic I've read of the twins where they switch, and I've gotta say, it was lovely lovely lovely! And very believeable :)

That was... amazing! I mean... wow... it's just... SQUEE!

:This reviewer can no longer review due to melting into a puddle of fan-girl goo:

KT

Good character exploration without being out of character.

I wouldn't mind reading more seme!Kaoru actually. Age-wise Hikaru would be seme, but personality-wise, I think Kaoru has potential to be seme.