i rlly liked this story and i think ur doing a very good job on it. its just a tad confusing without any breaks, but all in all it was rlly good and i will b checking for updates!

wow.. i like that surprising plot... it sounds good so far plz continue

well i like the story line so far, it's just a little jumbled and confusing.. thats what you need to work on.. need periods and commas where they need to be. break it up more if you need to ... but yeah i like it.

HI NICE STORY YOU KINDA LEFT OFF THE KIKYO THING?? OHH WELL UR STORY NOT MINE...DO YOU LIKE WAFFLES(YES I LIKE WAFFLES)