 SuperiorShortness 2009-11-07 . chapter 9A very fun idea, with Narcissa the intelligent Pureblood turning the tables on the innocent and naive muggle-raised Harry Potter. I also love the fact that Narcissa took charge and is basically now raising Harry as the Black Heir. However, the single most brilliant thing in this story is that the Pureblood superiority is founded in some truth in this story unlike others where its completely dismissed as nonsense or given complete truth. |
 Afterburn Tango 2009-10-21 . chapter 9Hawk... man. What can I say? This has been, without a doubt, a wild ride thus far. One filled with non stop laughter, I assure you. I nearly bypassed the story actually, since it had been left alone for so long, but I vaguely recognized the author name. I've read and enjoyed Master Nin some time ago so I figured.. ' Eh, should be good for a few laughs.'
A few? Naw, I literally had to stop reading and get a drink after choking for a moment when Narcissa lays in to Harry about what he must do for the evening of their consummation. Poor kid, heh. Well, considering that I'm a rather devout fan of older women myself, I don't feel all that much sympathy for finding himself stuck with a vicious, smokin' hot cougar - thanks to her own manipulation of the OoL - but... yeah. There is the fact that she's rather Dobby-like in her approach of Harry's best interests. Y'know, if Dobby was on amphetamines and had the unholy power of breasts on his side.
Here's hopin' for another chapter!
Tango. |
 Space Odin 2009-09-22 . chapter 9more please! i like this story it is different than other sirius dies/will stories and i can't wait until harry starts turning the tables on Narcissa. |
 riegert8 2009-09-09 . chapter 4How can Dumbledore do the same thing to Voldemort as he did to Harry when he did not work at Hogswart yet ? Dumbledore started working at Hogswart in Voldemort 3 years, so you are bashing the wrong person |
 Dupapier 2009-07-31 . chapter 9Hi,
I just finished Black Heir and really liked the story.
As it's a long time since you didn't updated it can you confirm that it's abandonned ?
Thanks in advance.
Laurent |
 Bellatrix Lepus 2009-07-22 . chapter 9All I can truthfully say is WOW what a story ! |
 Orchamus 2009-07-20 . chapter 8Where's chapter 9, or in this case 10, since it's not on the other sites, if i may ask? |
 Orchamus 2009-07-20 . chapter 9Fairly good, all considered. |
 Orchamus 2009-07-20 . chapter 4YAY!! Was pretty funny, if slightly odd as well. |
 Orchamus 2009-07-20 . chapter 2Well, its only rape if she's unwilling, and considering she's a Black, she's slightly crazy, so ya never know. |
 cezart 2009-07-19 . chapter 9bloody neat tale chap ;P As a ffnet user I ask you to finish what you started this is quite funny story. |
 Cassandra30 2009-06-06 . chapter 7Actually Arthur has a defense in that he reported his thoughts to the Head of the Wizengamot! |
 Cassandra30 2009-06-06 . chapter 6Ack! But it can be put back together. |
 Cassandra30 2009-06-06 . chapter 5Hee hee Poor Draco! |
 Cassandra30 2009-06-06 . chapter 4So he has no intentions of consummating his marriage. Draco comes under his responsibility too. |