Again, powerful. And it kinda reminds me of me... Thanks for sharing it. =D

Wow. So many people on FF have talent, and you're one of them, and I enjoy reading your stuff. =D
That's pretty powerful, and also very true.

Very nice, keep up the wonderful work.

Beautifully done!

Both poems are very well written, but I will have to read them over to try to fully understand their meaning.

Ah, a sweet and very beautiful poem. Excellent work!

Ey dude your back with another! You've really improved and i wish that i could start writing poems again. Well what was the plot of this poem? It felt like you were trapped and trying to escape somehow.. anywayz me just looking for inspiration and enlightenment here..^^ see ya and God bless!