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YuukiLovesZero
2009-10-18 . chapter 16
I honestly love your story. It's so funny! :D
YuukiLovesZero
2009-10-18 . chapter 8
I can SO see Yuki doing that too
XD
YuukiLovesZero
2009-10-18 . chapter 3
Best lines of life right here

"Like him, she couldn't refuse him anything either.

Even when he didn't ask.

...That could be a problem in the future."

cause it's SO true <3
YuukiLovesZero
2009-10-18 . chapter 2
I love the way you write these little chapters!
I really do.

PLEASE keep writing :D
Caroline Berlin
2009-07-18 . chapter 9
OH my gosh! That's so cute. "Tell no one, Yuuki. Or this is the last thing you'll ever get from me."

Sqee!
elemental heiress
2009-04-19 . chapter 8
After I read this chapter now whenever someone says "Gimme!" I go "Gimme gimme never gets!" so thank you!Lol
bunnyxx
2009-03-23 . chapter 15
haha this story is cute. love the bunny one. we all know she's lying! i hope. i love zero! he's awesome. and your name is also bree?
Animelover621
2009-01-26 . chapter 16
lol! that was soo cute!! motto motto kawaii!! X3
Risika135
2009-01-26 . chapter 16
Yeah, Zero was just a little bit OOC, but nothing too bad, so no worries! It was funny anyway. Keep up the good work!
YenGirl
2009-01-26 . chapter 16
I'vd missed your cute chapters, Bree!

LOL... Zero really asked for that one and of course Yuuki's a white, like she could be anything else in this sweet collection! :)

But I was thinking (since I've started exchanging plot bunny ideas with other awesome writers in the VK fandom here) that white bunny referred to Zero, brown to Yuuki and black to Kaname... *grins*

Loved how flabbergasted Zero was, though! *giggles*
Cheryl
2009-01-25 . chapter 16
HAHAHHAHA
nice, i like it, and they are FRICKEN cute
AssassinedAngel
2009-01-25 . chapter 16
Interesting =o I wouldn't say it's OOC. Zero is curious, and when he's curious, he has to know. He does back Yuuki into corners. xD

2009-01-25 . chapter 16
Thank you for the update! As usual, it's humorous, light, and full of Zero and Yuuki love. Ha ha. I would expect Zero to be beet-red when he heard Yuuki's response, hm? I can't wait to read more from you!
up.and
2008-12-06 . chapter 15
col! i'll be waiting for the next chapters!
Jvonr92
2008-10-04 . chapter 15
aw this one was sad :( *sniffle*
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