If you are going to do it over is kath going join them because if your going to do it over should you change that part since she still has a soul and all of those seven dont should she still be on ed's and the others side.

Cool Story Oh No Kath has been gived red stones:((

OMG. TEH SUSPENSE.

WHat...just...happened?

And why is Envy and Kath in the same town as the military?

FEAR TEH GLOMPAGE!

always nice to see Envy portrayed as nice.

4/8.

It's a good story, but there are a few spelling mistakes.

She'll choose yes and no you won't.

Dude, you need to avoid doing that, cuz I had to go back and read the last chapter to recap. And this one STILL didn't make much sense!

Why do our parents discuss how late we stay up?

This sounds a lot like my fic in making. Oh well, popular topic, eh? But how would she transmute her blood? I understand the iron blood alchemist, but you have a limited supply. If she used her blood to create a wall, she would die from a lack of oxygen circulation...

I like it!

It coukld be longer though but its a good chapter

Hmm...she's getting away with quite a lot of human transmutation lately...

I smells me some repercussions.

Ya know, it's fine up until we get to Ed pissing at Evin, and then it all fals apart WHY OH WHY DIDNT YOU LET ME EDIT IT?

Good, though.

Ah, pardon my mistake. Though this site fails to censor bad writing, links are still frowned upon, apparently.

fracturedfour . com /badfic_9. htm

Believe me... you may find it's worth the great effort of copy, paste and backspace. If you can manage the challenge.

This may interest you.

AAHAHAHAHAHAH! AHAHAHAHHA!

this is gonna be good.

... bitch...

i like it! make more!