great fic, but i think they fell in love too quickly

You have not updated in like years. So are you going to write more to this story. You have some interesting twists in it that I am looking forward to reading more about. I think you made the Hitomi/Dilandau love a little to early in my own opinion. I think it should have been a little more drawn out and such. I hope you write more though.

Folken, drools, Folken. This is a nice story. What happens to Van-sama then?

Write more I love this story and things write more more more...

That story was cool. Make more chapters please. It will make me and other people happy.

Interesting title...french? Okay, but the comments is that the beginning was pretty good,but I just don't see how they fall in love so quickly.

Come on, more more more, more Hitomi/Dilandau romance...! I want more

have you seen the whole series cuz Balgus dies right away...it's good so far but a little confusing! keep up good work!

cool fic so far. An intertesting twist having Hitomi as the Queen of Fanelia. I hope you get more chapters up soon!

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I have to admit, I'm a HUGE alternate pairings fan, so this story is right up my alley. This story is VERY interesting and I just can't wait till the next chapter comes out! Only thing is, I was wondering what you did with Van...hmmmmm...I wonder, did you kill him off or something? Oh well, he's not important. Anyways, please write the next chapter soon!

I like this story so far, and I also enjoy the DilandauxHitomi idea, but I think that you made Dilandau just a little bit out of character in chapter four. I am just informing you of this, but please to not take offense. ; It is still okay the way it is.

Please hurry up and upload the next chapter. This is such a great fic. I just luv it. Okay, well that's my review. Bye _

I'm taking this is an anit-Van story? ne ways, it's really pumpin bass over here. we're liking it, every bit. such a turn from the usual.

Did Hitomi had a feeling for Dilandau? you made your story light but had more sense. Characters are not so drastic and at least a bit of a gentleman. I like it a lot. More chap pls. and romance too! _

nice job xelena! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! *jumps up and down like a maniac* YAY YAY YAY! my o my LAY OFF THE SUGAR! in case you didn't know: akari_chanrui! [is now] chichirui! yes there are exclaimation marks... o well! DILLY! *guys in white rush in and drag her out to the ambulance* lo siento.. chiru-chan needs to cut down on the sugar highs... *shakes head* sigh...