 Obi_chan 2006-10-14 . chapter 1 Me rei much with your fic XD
I am of santiago of chile (since(as,like) podras realize I do not speak well the Englishman ... but I hope that you could understand me)
Me and esforsado in reading your fic and to be able to understand it
And I have done it ... I am charmed with me your fic...
Enserio that me to fact to re-go enough
I wait that prompt continues...
And for especially I hope that you could understand this review ... since I am not an expert in the language XD
Regards!! |
 Namariegreenleaf 2006-10-08 . chapter 2 so funny! laughed so hard! good job keep it up! ^^ |
 Sylvia Viridian 2006-10-07 . chapter 2Lol, wow...somehow, even though Hakkai's been addicted to the Sidekick...he still manages to be Hakkai about it. That is to say, I suppose, he's out of character enough to be funny, while still in character enough that he's himself, not some random person who happens to share his name and appearance.
'Sanzo obviously didn’t spend as much time watching the man as Gojyo did.'
XDD! Gojyo, don't you think there's something strange about you spending that much time watching someone who isn't female? (I love it when they're oblivious.)
I love it so far. More soon! (And I promise, I'll work on the next update to Journey of Discovery just as soon as I get my files back. My laptop died, and was sent in for repairs.) |
 Goofy Edward 2006-10-06 . chapter 1Shiny hell demon! Update soon. ^^ |
 Sylvia Viridian 2006-10-03 . chapter 1Squee, you are such love for writing this. It doesn't seem terribly OOC to me, at least not yet. Hakkai's known to be unpredictable sometimes, after all. And the others are perfect, notably Sanzo, who is really hard to write in-character, but you've managed it nicely.
*puppy-eyes* Will there be Hakkai/Gojyo hinting, maybe? Just a little?
Lol, I can't wait to see what's next. |
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